You loved swing and you loved heights
Life is strange. For me, a plight
It took you away. Far far from my sight
I sit there still and lifeless in fright
The fate mistook you in place of me
I'm a jigsaw with missing pieces without thee
Together we fought and found glee out of blues
Drained of blues even, life is out of hues
I cry day and night with endless pleads
Mom accuse me for your fate. My heart bleed!
I thrive for nothing. Her love and care is all I need
Do you suspect my love to be a mastermind seed?
Was it my fault that I was different from you?
Was it my fault to be a brother of someone as great as you?
I know you expect me to bright and shine
I promise you, I won't fail you or let you down the line.
Your loving brother
Amir
Written for A to Z Challenge
11 Token to this Friendship
thats one touching poem ! it amazing how you connecting challenge with the story :) keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteYesterday I thought to end the story but somehow I have planned things to take this further. Lets see how far it goes. Happy reading your comment :D
DeleteThanks, Sachiii
A very fitting poem to the story you wrote :) Good one Simran :)
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Thanks dear :)
DeleteHi Simran, I am not a fan of poetry but could still see that your poem is very touching. Good show! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm so pleased to have you here Ma'am :)
DeleteGlad to know my poetry touched your heart. Hope to see you here again.
Thank you.
It's really touching dear :) You are doing such a challenging job, keep it up... :)
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Thanks dear Arpita :)
DeleteEmotions weaved aptly through the lines :)
ReplyDeleteNo. Not his fault. People differ. Though they carry the same blood.
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That was a terribly saddening poem - you've captured the emotion well!
ReplyDeleteEither positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran