''People forgets by the time the loss you faced. '' So True!
Everything seems fine on this sandy beach like any other evening in orange shade. Laughter can be heard by everyone but no one can listen scream.
'' Hey Sea, You swallowed him, I wont' forgive you even if your waves touches my feet Million times''
Shadorma (Syllable- 3-5-3-3-7-5)
(In context with the Fiction written above)
The time's lap
Makes everything
Oblivion
I'm martyr
An exception, I lament
Grieve! Lost someone
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amazing 55 fiction! lovely read :)
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Thanks for stopping by...
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Brilliant phrases! I indeed moved by the lines... so genuine and significant.
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and it’s so nice having your friendship here dear, Simran :)
Best wishes
Happy to read your encouraging words :)
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Wish you too A very Happy Friendship Day :)
Pleasure to have you my friend!
Happy Friendship Day little one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for introducing 'Shadorma,' it's pretty new to me. I couldn't handle such discipline in verses :) You are gifted :D
Very impressive laconic fiction. Brilliant job on shadorma. All the best !! My vote goes to you for sure :-)
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DeleteShadorma is new to me too. Its my first attempt for the Shadorma and Fiction.
Happy you liked! I am really blessed! :) :)
Thank You so much.
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Happy you liked Shadorma and Fiction. And Wow! thanks a lot for blessing me your support! Precious :)
Shadorma is something novel for me!!! ... you have done a good job with it though :)
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Thanks, Menachery! :)
DeleteNeat 55...unforgivable waves!?!Nice imagery...
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Hope to see you again...
Happy blogging
Yes, that is another form of Sea .. tragic but real!!
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I read about you..You are just 10! And you writes Awesome!
Wish you the best of Blogging! God Bless you.
Beautiful concept expressed nicely. Just loved it. And thanks for finally visiting my blog.
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Yep! Finally..LOL
Will be your frequent reader. Let me finish my exams :)
It reminds me how life is a paradox!!!
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Thanks Karan. Nice to have you here :)
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//even if your waves touches my feet Million times //
ReplyDeletewow, love those lines!
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Thanks Kappu :)
Deletevery nice 55..liked it very much..all the best..
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You liked ..my pleasure! Thank you so much for the wishes.
Happy Blogging!
That's so sweet of you Simran.. Ya.. after quite a long time.. was a bit busy to go through the blogs.. all the best wishes for you dear..
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Thats why they say ..
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Jo saaz pe guzri woh kissi ne nahin suni
Bikram's
Great lines!
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Very nice.. well written fiction, Sims.
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Thanks Dearo! :)
Deleteyou managed to leave such an impression in such few words! brilliant!
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DeleteWords are always powerful when used aptly! :) That's the art F'55 requires.
Thank you so much dear! Happy to have you here!
A different take on the picture. ATB
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this is a lovely expression dear!!! :D
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absolutely lovely sweetheart ! :D
and yes a very happy friendship day to you !!
Thank you so much aish! reading your words makes me happy!
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I liked the shadorma..All the best !
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DeleteShadorma and 55-er, what a way to express the pain, "Wont' forgive you, even if your waves touches my feet Million times" - Only some writers have the ability to create meanings from what happens in general. You've written a masterpiece here.. Thanks! Keep writing..
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Hi Special One!
DeleteShadorma and F'55 both are new to me and I am so happy that I justified with my very attempt.I wish I could make you say the same with the creation of my other write ups too :)
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Stay Smiling!
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Special One,
DeleteYeyyy! I am so excited! :)
Want to covey you my heartiest Thanks! for being there everytime to encourage and support me :)
the idea is interesting.
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DeleteGlad you felt the idea interesting! thanks!
Wow! I'd never pick a 55er to do well. However, this one's really really nice. The thing about touching the feet is so so wow. It's like why did it never occur to me :) Very good job.
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DeleteHappy my words touched you...Hope you write one 55 soon :)
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Very nice F55. Good one!
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Good one and nice Shadorma. Good luck for BAT.
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DeleteBest wishes to you too dear.
Good attempt Simran.. nicely expressed the feeling.. good luck
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you never fail to convey the most perfect emotions in your poetry, simran! <3 :-)
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