Then the magical moment that happens at last,
A kiss, a touch, just a word can all happen so fast,
On a night like tonight as I wish you were here,
Holding me close to your heart so we're near,
Each time I look into your eyes I know its true!
All my life I have prayed for someone like you,
Here is my heart its always been yours to keep,
There is a feeling so strong if you dig down deep,
I know that you know its a feeling so strong,
I'd tell you I love you in a poem or even a song..
You've had my heart from the very first thought,
This love was a priceless feeling, wasn't bought,
I'll give you everything that comes along,
This life we live is real, nothing could go wrong..
So here is my heart its yours to spoil and always hold,
Our love is flexibly fair yet sometimes isn't easy to fold,
So come what may but you're in my heart forever,
So take good care of it, if you want us to be together,
I promise I'll do my best to treat you with respect,
I'll never leave your side, betray or even neglect.
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"You've had my heart from the very first thought,This love was a priceless feeling, wasn't bought"
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