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Confession by Amir

You loved swing and you loved heights 
Life is strange. For me, a plight 
It took you away. Far far from my sight
I sit there still and lifeless in fright 

The fate mistook you in place of me
I'm a jigsaw with missing pieces without thee
Together we fought and found glee out of blues 
Drained of blues even, life is out of hues

I cry day and night with endless pleads 
Mom accuse me for your fate. My heart bleed!
I thrive for nothing. Her love and care is all I need
Do you suspect my love to be a mastermind seed? 

Was it my fault that I was different from you?
Was it my fault to be a brother of someone as great as you?
I know you expect me to bright and shine
I promise you, I won't fail you or let you down the line. 

Your loving brother
Amir 

Written for A to Z Challenge

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  1. thats one touching poem ! it amazing how you connecting challenge with the story :) keep writing :)

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    1. Yesterday I thought to end the story but somehow I have planned things to take this further. Lets see how far it goes. Happy reading your comment :D
      Thanks, Sachiii

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  2. A very fitting poem to the story you wrote :) Good one Simran :)

    Crux

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  3. Hi Simran, I am not a fan of poetry but could still see that your poem is very touching. Good show! :)

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    1. I'm so pleased to have you here Ma'am :)
      Glad to know my poetry touched your heart. Hope to see you here again.
      Thank you.

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  4. It's really touching dear :) You are doing such a challenging job, keep it up... :)
    http://shinningappy.blogspot.in/

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  5. Emotions weaved aptly through the lines :)

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  6. No. Not his fault. People differ. Though they carry the same blood.

    Someone is Special

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  7. That was a terribly saddening poem - you've captured the emotion well!

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