Your enclosure
right from my birth
I merely a bud
You save me from
surrounding dearth,
Within you I nutured myself,
A sudden casteaway of yours
rendered me into a new self,
You're still by my side,
yet you let my efflorecence
to be in the light,
you have been always
a part of me,
without you
I am incomplete
with lost essence of
life and glee
I am fading away,
With each wind's blow
I sway.
Such beautiful words you have woven together..
ReplyDeleteGlad you find my words beautiful. Thanks Ranita ji :)
Deletei read the title and the first thought that came to mind was I need to fade away...
ReplyDeletenice little poem simran
Bikram
You need not Bikram dear :)
DeleteThis poem reminds me of my poem, "Come on idiot, you are for me" Touching poem little one!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
:)
DeleteGlad it brought some beautiful memories to you!
Thank you.
Beautiful ... so deep and true :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks dear :)
DeleteTouching and so deep as always...:)
ReplyDeleteMohu <3
Deletethanks sisy!
Beautiful Simran! This connects me with mother and child :)
ReplyDeleteWow! you make me think with a different vision.
DeleteThanks dear :)
Touching Such beautiful words
ReplyDeleteGreat to know it touched your heart. Thanks :)
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