Forget- Me - Not

by - Saturday, July 28, 2012


Being with you gives me
immense pleasure and bliss
dear, forget -me -not

Written for Haiku Heights

You May Also Like

40 Token to this Friendship

  1. what this haiku heights is??????

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi gayatri,
      Haiku Heights is blog about ''Haiku'' - A Japanese form of writing poetry that has 5-7-5 syllable. (Google about it)

      At Haiku Heights every Saturday we are given a prompt to write over.There are many other bloggers take part, appreciate with comments. Its fun..you must try it gayatri :)
      Hope to see you writing Haiku..and if you need any help regarding writing Haiku then do contact me. :)

      Delete
  2. Replies
    1. Thank you :) :)
      Happy to see you here...

      Delete
  3. Simran, this is a really cute poem. It speaks of love, whether first or last or any. Nice write!

    Just a suggestion: Your haiku has more than 17 syllables. Maybe you could rewrite the same beautiful poem? :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Happy you liked and found it cute ,Vaishali! Thanks
      Hmmm... maybe!
      that's a great idea, Vaishali! I think I should go for it. Will try to elaborate and shape it into a long poem :)

      thanks for the suggestion. I appreciate. Hope to see you again :)

      Delete
    2. Anytime, my friend! Glad to be of some help! :)

      Delete
    3. :) :)
      Happy to have you in this beautiful journey of Friendship!
      Stay Smiling Buddy! :D

      Delete
  4. Replies
    1. :) :) thanks irene :)
      Love to see you here ... <3

      Delete
  5. Replies
    1. Thank you so much Grace :)
      Happy to see you after a long time.

      Delete
  6. Straight from heart!!
    Simple and sweet haiku Simi..

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. yep! words purely from my heart :D
      Happy you liked ,Valli! Thanks

      Delete
  7. lovely romantic senyru ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Welcome to My Friendship, ArtMuseDog and Carol

      Namaste, Happy you liked :)
      Thank you so much for stopping by and for the comment.

      Delete
  8. Replies
    1. Welcome to My Friendship, joanne :)

      Happy to read your words. Thanks !

      Delete
  9. I love it! So sweet..:) And I find you really sweet Simran..:) Keep sharing dear,:) God bless..:)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Happy you love it! :)
      Aww :) you finds me sweet! I tell you, I am ;) :D Thank you so much dear.

      Pleasure to a fine creative blogger :)
      Thanks...best wishes to you buddy!

      Delete
  10. its a lovely take on the topic dear :)
    keep going on :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Was missing your words and finally received! Happy me..thanks ashzzes!
      Wish you the same :)

      Delete
  11. Awe.... Sweeeeeeeeeeettttttttttt!!!!!!!! :D
    Tell you what, mere presence matter even if the person isn't aware of your existence but still when they're around it matters!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. :) :)
      Exactly! I agree :)
      Their little presence, words and attention means a lot! (Special feeling being around Dear,Special Ones)
      Heart fears to loose them and urges...forget me not! :)
      P.S.- I always say to my dears...listen its not easy to forget me! But still I say..forget me not.( In a warning tone) LOL! ;) :D

      Happy to read your words :)
      Stay Smiling !

      Delete
    2. LOL :D
      Indeed. I can imagine the scene because I used to tell something similar to my best friend back in school. Used to say, " You will get busy enough not to think of me everyday but whenever I am going to cross your mind you'll be lost for hours" :P :D

      Delete
    3. That's sweet :) :)

      Thanks for sharing yours...Happy to read :)

      Delete
  12. Loved ones have that divine power

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Welcome to My Friendship , Locomente

      True :)
      Thank you so much for stopping by...Wish to see you here again! :)
      Happy Blogging.

      Delete
  13. Romantic, but the use of the phrase "forget-me-not" could have been more pronounced. It gets a beautiful effect, but somewhere, something I felt lacking.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you so much for sharing your views, Dearo! :)

      Delete
  14. Concise but direct ;) Loved it!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. happy you loved it!
      thank you so much :)

      Delete
  15. Hmmm... Someone is so romantic... :)

    Someone is Special

    ReplyDelete

Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran