This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
what this haiku heights is??????
ReplyDeleteHi gayatri,
DeleteHaiku Heights is blog about ''Haiku'' - A Japanese form of writing poetry that has 5-7-5 syllable. (Google about it)
At Haiku Heights every Saturday we are given a prompt to write over.There are many other bloggers take part, appreciate with comments. Its fun..you must try it gayatri :)
Hope to see you writing Haiku..and if you need any help regarding writing Haiku then do contact me. :)
Short and sweet :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :) :)
DeleteSweet message !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you :) :)
DeleteHappy to see you here...
Simran, this is a really cute poem. It speaks of love, whether first or last or any. Nice write!
ReplyDeleteJust a suggestion: Your haiku has more than 17 syllables. Maybe you could rewrite the same beautiful poem? :)
Happy you liked and found it cute ,Vaishali! Thanks
DeleteHmmm... maybe!
that's a great idea, Vaishali! I think I should go for it. Will try to elaborate and shape it into a long poem :)
thanks for the suggestion. I appreciate. Hope to see you again :)
Anytime, my friend! Glad to be of some help! :)
Delete:) :)
DeleteHappy to have you in this beautiful journey of Friendship!
Stay Smiling Buddy! :D
This is very romantic, Simran <3 <3 <3 :-)
ReplyDelete:) :) thanks irene :)
DeleteLove to see you here ... <3
Lovely thoughts ~
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Grace :)
DeleteHappy to see you after a long time.
Straight from heart!!
ReplyDeleteSimple and sweet haiku Simi..
yep! words purely from my heart :D
DeleteHappy you liked ,Valli! Thanks
lovely romantic senyru ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to My Friendship, ArtMuseDog and Carol
DeleteNamaste, Happy you liked :)
Thank you so much for stopping by and for the comment.
:-)
ReplyDeletelovely and romantic....
ReplyDeleteWelcome to My Friendship, joanne :)
DeleteHappy to read your words. Thanks !
I love it! So sweet..:) And I find you really sweet Simran..:) Keep sharing dear,:) God bless..:)
ReplyDeleteHappy you love it! :)
DeleteAww :) you finds me sweet! I tell you, I am ;) :D Thank you so much dear.
Pleasure to a fine creative blogger :)
Thanks...best wishes to you buddy!
its a lovely take on the topic dear :)
ReplyDeletekeep going on :)
Was missing your words and finally received! Happy me..thanks ashzzes!
DeleteWish you the same :)
Awe.... Sweeeeeeeeeeettttttttttt!!!!!!!! :D
ReplyDeleteTell you what, mere presence matter even if the person isn't aware of your existence but still when they're around it matters!
:) :)
DeleteExactly! I agree :)
Their little presence, words and attention means a lot! (Special feeling being around Dear,Special Ones)
Heart fears to loose them and urges...forget me not! :)
P.S.- I always say to my dears...listen its not easy to forget me! But still I say..forget me not.( In a warning tone) LOL! ;) :D
Happy to read your words :)
Stay Smiling !
LOL :D
DeleteIndeed. I can imagine the scene because I used to tell something similar to my best friend back in school. Used to say, " You will get busy enough not to think of me everyday but whenever I am going to cross your mind you'll be lost for hours" :P :D
That's sweet :) :)
DeleteThanks for sharing yours...Happy to read :)
Loved ones have that divine power
ReplyDeleteWelcome to My Friendship , Locomente
DeleteTrue :)
Thank you so much for stopping by...Wish to see you here again! :)
Happy Blogging.
Romantic, but the use of the phrase "forget-me-not" could have been more pronounced. It gets a beautiful effect, but somewhere, something I felt lacking.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing your views, Dearo! :)
DeleteConcise but direct ;) Loved it!
ReplyDeletehappy you loved it!
Deletethank you so much :)
Hmmm... Someone is so romantic... :)
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
:) :)
DeleteThanks Special One!