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Haiku :Hope

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Lightens the dark path 
pouring at lucidity
a ray of hope shines  

a ray of hope shines 
Intertwine will and power 
makes wonder at times 

makes wonder at times 
when the world says, ''let the hope 
within never die'' 

Written for Haiku Heights ( April Heights - Day 6 - Hope )
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  1. CYNOSUREApril 6, 2012 at 10:05 PM

    power really makes wonder at times...superb haiku Simran... :)

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    1. SimranApril 8, 2012 at 9:24 PM

      Glad it made you wonder!
      Thank you,Sarab :)

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  2. ChevrefeuilleApril 6, 2012 at 10:49 PM

    Really nice this cascading haiku. Love this form. I use it myself very often.

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    1. SimranApril 8, 2012 at 9:26 PM

      Me too like this form a lot :)
      Thank you so much Cheverefeuille

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  3. ElleceeApril 6, 2012 at 11:41 PM

    "a ray of hope shines" I like this line especially. I enjoyed your haiku very much.

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    1. SimranApril 8, 2012 at 9:26 PM

      Happy , you enjoyed my words :)
      Thank you, Ellecee

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  4. The PoetApril 7, 2012 at 3:32 AM

    Hello Simran dear.
    Where there's hope, there is life. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

    Are you taking part in NaPoWriMo? I saw your blog listed in the participating sites list?

    Thanks for listing my blog in your best buddies list. I've changed my blog address, so you might want to update your bookmark. Here's my new URL & post for NaPoWriMo/A-Z Challenge:
    Day 6: Forbidden Kisses
    I'm also on Bloggers if you care to vote for me. ;-)

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    1. SimranApril 8, 2012 at 9:28 PM

      Hope always shines

      I'll be not able to take part because already I have a busy schedule and my studies. Yep you are the part of my best buddies! :)
      Will get to bloggers soon.

      Thank you

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  5. Jyoti MishraApril 7, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    hope holds so much power..
    it can sail your boat out of any misery..

    Beautifully written !!

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  6. Someone is SpecialApril 7, 2012 at 8:12 PM

    Is that picture clicked by you? Beautiful pics and words..

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    1. SimranApril 8, 2012 at 9:30 PM

      No it's not clicked by me.. sad!
      Will soon share my many more clicks with you :)
      Thank you so much!

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    2. Someone is SpecialApril 11, 2012 at 3:09 AM

      I will wait till then.. :-)

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    3. Someone is SpecialApril 13, 2012 at 11:46 PM

      Hmm.. no new posts?

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    4. SimranApril 15, 2012 at 9:16 PM

      Will come up with back to back soon :D

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  7. Mohini PuranikApril 7, 2012 at 9:33 PM

    Very inspiring Simran

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  8. AlcinaApril 13, 2012 at 12:22 AM

    It seems you are pretty engrossed in haikus haan..You know i had given a couple of tries but i ain't good at it at all..you have grown so good in this Haiku Princess :)

    Visiting after long..feels nice :)

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    1. SimranApril 15, 2012 at 9:18 PM

      So happy to have you here Snehu!
      Rejoiced !

      No worries, will help you to make you learn writing haiku :)
      Keep giving your views ... you know na how much precious they are! :)

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  9. sHoNaApril 19, 2012 at 7:24 PM

    nice image .initially i thought u clkd dat pic.
    enyway beautiful poetry- haiku. I've just read several on your blog and I love how you grab the natural world and turn it into emotion.
    Beautifully heartfelt. Thank you! (Hugs)

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    1. SimranApril 23, 2012 at 5:40 PM

      Happy you like my poetry ... your appreciation is my award.
      Thank you so much :)

      Hugs!

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