This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
power really makes wonder at times...superb haiku Simran... :)
ReplyDeleteGlad it made you wonder!
DeleteThank you,Sarab :)
Really nice this cascading haiku. Love this form. I use it myself very often.
ReplyDeleteMe too like this form a lot :)
DeleteThank you so much Cheverefeuille
"a ray of hope shines" I like this line especially. I enjoyed your haiku very much.
ReplyDeleteHappy , you enjoyed my words :)
DeleteThank you, Ellecee
Hello Simran dear.
ReplyDeleteWhere there's hope, there is life. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Are you taking part in NaPoWriMo? I saw your blog listed in the participating sites list?
Thanks for listing my blog in your best buddies list. I've changed my blog address, so you might want to update your bookmark. Here's my new URL & post for NaPoWriMo/A-Z Challenge:
Day 6: Forbidden Kisses
I'm also on Bloggers if you care to vote for me. ;-)
Hope always shines
DeleteI'll be not able to take part because already I have a busy schedule and my studies. Yep you are the part of my best buddies! :)
Will get to bloggers soon.
Thank you
hope holds so much power..
ReplyDeleteit can sail your boat out of any misery..
Beautifully written !!
I agree ,Jyoti
DeleteThank you so much :)
Is that picture clicked by you? Beautiful pics and words..
ReplyDeleteNo it's not clicked by me.. sad!
DeleteWill soon share my many more clicks with you :)
Thank you so much!
I will wait till then.. :-)
DeleteHmm.. no new posts?
DeleteWill come up with back to back soon :D
DeleteVery inspiring Simran
ReplyDeleteHappy my words inspired you ,Mohu :)
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It seems you are pretty engrossed in haikus haan..You know i had given a couple of tries but i ain't good at it at all..you have grown so good in this Haiku Princess :)
ReplyDeleteVisiting after long..feels nice :)
So happy to have you here Snehu!
DeleteRejoiced !
No worries, will help you to make you learn writing haiku :)
Keep giving your views ... you know na how much precious they are! :)
nice image .initially i thought u clkd dat pic.
ReplyDeleteenyway beautiful poetry- haiku. I've just read several on your blog and I love how you grab the natural world and turn it into emotion.
Beautifully heartfelt. Thank you! (Hugs)
Happy you like my poetry ... your appreciation is my award.
DeleteThank you so much :)
Hugs!