This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
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Thank you Sarab! :)
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Yeah they do! :)
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I wonder too ~ nice one ~
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Beautiful haiku Simi!
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and what do you wonder :)
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Bikram's
I wonder and keep wondering :D
DeleteAnd I enjoy to dwell myself in my imaginations....
Wow!
Me too love Blue and also Orange! :D
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niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee little one..
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SmileS :)
Very creative:)
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DeleteThey never fail to make me wonder too. Lovely to read you.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much,Asni :)
Deletepainting pictures in the sky... i cant stop wondering either. beautiful haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kirti :)
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