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I wonder each time   
at those trifle white creative 
clouds in the blue sky 

Written for Haiku Heights

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  1. CYNOSUREMarch 18, 2012 at 8:23 PM

    another nice set of lines... :)
    beautiful haiku... :)

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  2. Mohini PuranikMarch 18, 2012 at 8:24 PM

    That is wonderful, I love this creation always...

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  3. zongrikMarch 18, 2012 at 11:37 PM

    they do cause wonderment

    senryu of blues & honesty

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    1. SimranMarch 25, 2012 at 9:21 PM

      Yeah they do! :)
      Thanks zongirk ..nice to have you !

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  4. GraceMarch 19, 2012 at 4:21 AM

    I wonder too ~ nice one ~

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  5. JANUMarch 19, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    :-)

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    1. SimranMarch 25, 2012 at 9:22 PM

      Keep smiling always ...
      Thanks for the smile :)

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  6. Sri ValliMarch 19, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    Beautiful haiku Simi!

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    1. SimranMarch 25, 2012 at 9:24 PM

      Thanks Valli! :)
      appreciations from you means a lot to me..

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  7. BikramMarch 19, 2012 at 4:09 PM

    and what do you wonder :)

    blueeeeeeeeeeeeee my favourite color :)

    Bikram's

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    1. SimranMarch 25, 2012 at 9:38 PM

      I wonder and keep wondering :D
      And I enjoy to dwell myself in my imaginations....

      Wow!
      Me too love Blue and also Orange! :D

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  8. ShreyaMarch 19, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    :) xx

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  9. Someone is SpecialMarch 20, 2012 at 3:47 AM

    niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee little one..

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    1. SimranMarch 25, 2012 at 9:40 PM

      Thanksssssss Special One! :)
      Appreciation from you makes me fly ...

      SmileS :)

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  10. Rahul BhatiaMarch 20, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    Very creative:)

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  11. Asni / A Walk In My HeartMarch 20, 2012 at 12:33 PM

    They never fail to make me wonder too. Lovely to read you.

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  12. N.S.KirtiMarch 21, 2012 at 11:39 AM

    painting pictures in the sky... i cant stop wondering either. beautiful haiku :)

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