Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Fading Away


Your enclosure 
right from my birth 
I merely a bud
You save me from 
surrounding dearth,
Within you I nutured myself, 
A sudden casteaway of yours 
rendered me into a new self,
You're still by my side, 
yet you let my efflorecence
 to be in the light,
you have been always 
a part of me, 
without you 
 I am incomplete 
with lost essence of 
life and glee
I am fading away,
With each wind's blow 
I sway.

14 comments:

  1. Such beautiful words you have woven together..

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    1. Glad you find my words beautiful. Thanks Ranita ji :)

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  2. i read the title and the first thought that came to mind was I need to fade away...

    nice little poem simran

    Bikram

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  3. This poem reminds me of my poem, "Come on idiot, you are for me" Touching poem little one!

    Someone is Special

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    1. :)
      Glad it brought some beautiful memories to you!
      Thank you.

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  4. Beautiful ... so deep and true :-)

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  5. Touching and so deep as always...:)

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  6. Beautiful Simran! This connects me with mother and child :)

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    1. Wow! you make me think with a different vision.
      Thanks dear :)

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    1. Great to know it touched your heart. Thanks :)

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~Simran