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Let it be A Suspense

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This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 31; the thirty-first edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'Strangers in the Night'


 Oops! I missed my bus 

Its Hilarious! to wait while saying she draws a sad face on the wall.
                    Next night...
She is before the time and is dumbstruck to see the sad face she sketched now smiling.
Sweet, who could be...?
Let it be a Suspense!  ''Strangers In The Night'' she writes and leave.



The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. Introduced By: Someone is Special , Participation Count: 06



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  1. AnishaSeptember 2, 2012 at 11:20 PM

    all the best for BAT! :)

    ❤Not Just My Allegories❤

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:10 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Anisha

      Thank you so much for the wishes!
      Good Luck to you too :)

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  2. Amrit SinhaSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:17 AM

    This was really sweet :-)

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  3. Someone is SpecialSeptember 3, 2012 at 4:32 AM

    Let it be a Suspense Little One! I'm glad to say I'm reading a future Queen of 55's! Keep writing! Good Luck!

    Someone is Special

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:12 PM

      Whoa! That's a big title! Was in doubt to post this for the contest or not but Happy you liked it... yeyyyyy :)

      Thank you so much.

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    2. Someone is SpecialSeptember 8, 2012 at 5:25 AM

      a lot little one..

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    3. SimranSeptember 8, 2012 at 10:52 AM

      :D

      Thankssss :)
      I am flying!

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  4. JeevanSeptember 3, 2012 at 12:44 PM

    Strange for me to understand!

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  5. The Solitary WriterSeptember 3, 2012 at 1:15 PM

    Haha - The stranger changed it to smiling face huh... Short and sweet Sim


    Strangers in the Night

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  6. RioZeeSeptember 3, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    Very curt and meaningful redressal. Supe.

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:14 PM

      Happy to have you here...
      Thank you so much , Maun Vision

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  7. BikramSeptember 3, 2012 at 5:11 PM

    Simran, you need to write a small post after this explaining what you mean. for the likes of slow readers like me .. It gets too complicated :) he he he

    but it was funny, thinking who that stranger could be who put the SMILE on the sad face .. you do that do you , make a face while waiting .. I do it too :)

    Bikram's

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:16 PM

      Oyiii.. need to explain this? Hmm
      I'll come with the idea in the form of a proper story.

      Heheh.. yes, fun even in imagination :D
      Same pinch* I do :p :D

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  8. AishwaryaSeptember 3, 2012 at 8:30 PM

    hahaha!!
    another 55er? lovely!!
    the suspense is in the air indeed!wonder who did it!!!many possibilities.
    keep it up :)
    all the best dear!

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:18 PM

      Possibilities have no end ;)
      Glad you felt the Suspense in the air and Fiction :D

      Thanks ...best wishes to you too!

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  9. Kshitij KK KhuranaSeptember 3, 2012 at 11:15 PM

    Sweet one. Looks like this SHE is a big girl but little at heart. :)
    And in my views, the stranger is an old man. Don't know why I say that.

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:20 PM

      Yes, you guessed it right that SHE is me... a perky girl! :D
      Ouch! an old man .. maybe!! :P
      after all its about Strangers!! well that would be funny indeed. Thanks for sharing your views! :)

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  10. T F CarthickSeptember 4, 2012 at 2:01 PM

    Interestingly done. Nice. I have usually read your poems only. First time reading a 55er from you.

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:22 PM

      Glad you found it interesting, TF! :)
      Yep.. usually I write poems ...this is my second try for F:55

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  11. Counselor SharmaSeptember 4, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    hehehe very funny post...

    City gal in Europe

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  12. Amit SinghSeptember 4, 2012 at 7:07 PM

    Cute one ... ATB

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  13. Deepa DuraisamySeptember 4, 2012 at 7:15 PM

    Cute :) ATB for BAT!

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  14. Karan ShahSeptember 4, 2012 at 11:06 PM

    i simply loved the end...nyc one :)
    ATB for BAT :)
    i could not participate...but u can see my post here
    Karan - Strangers in the Night

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    1. Karan ShahSeptember 5, 2012 at 6:58 PM

      hey the above link is broken
      u can see my post here
      Karan - Strangers in the Night

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    2. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:25 PM

      Glad you liked it, Karan :)
      Thank you so much for your wishes....
      Sad... I'll be st yours soon. Thanks for sharing :)

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  15. IreneSeptember 4, 2012 at 11:15 PM

    that was very cute! it was suspense with a touch of optimism at the end. <3 :-)

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:26 PM

      Glad reading your words ,irene.
      thank you so much :)

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  16. dishitdSeptember 5, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    lol!

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  17. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:34 AM

    Good one Simran..you write good 55F. Good luck for BAT.

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    1. SimranSeptember 6, 2012 at 8:27 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Diwakar

      Happy you liked it! :)
      Thank you so much for the wishes
      Best wishes to you too !

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  18. Jayashree SrivatsanSeptember 7, 2012 at 2:23 PM

    Moral of the story 'One should not draw faces on walls' What says you Simran? :D ha ha...Anyways was an interesting read. Good Luck!

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  19. SimranSeptember 7, 2012 at 7:02 PM

    Welcome to My Friendship, jaish_vats

    Hahaha ... yeah ;)
    Glad you found it interesting.Thank you so much. Hope to have here again.
    Best wishes to you too :)

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  20. Ph_September 7, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    Hmm first I got confused, why in world is she sad? :P Then re-read again. Good post dear friend :)

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    1. SimranSeptember 8, 2012 at 10:56 AM

      When I made my friends read this one ..they said ..ye kya hai? :P
      LOL! Its hard to understand at once. Happy you re read and the confusion is no more :)
      Thanks buddy! :)
      BTW..How's everything going? How you did in exams?

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  21. UnknownSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:20 PM

    Ahh. Nice FFF. ATB

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  22. Anu ~*~September 8, 2012 at 11:24 PM

    oh .. Good one simran ..i liked it ..

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  23. Richi BaidwanSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    Can be tagged as anything from haunting to cute! I`ll stick to the latter! Nice one.

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  24. ManasaSeptember 9, 2012 at 12:03 PM

    Haha Loved it Simran!

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