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The postman came with a letter. Ten years had been passed in a wait and when I gave up every hope, it came like a savior. I’d never expected that my only son, Rohan would change to become a stranger for his own dad who loved him more than himself. I ran towards the gate though my feet refused, almost wilted. As I opened to read it, a strange fear enveloped me. It wasn’t from Rohan but from my wife, Simran, whom I had murdered exactly ten years back from today. Her innocent wrinkled face appeared before me. I gasped.

Word Count: 100

Written for A Prompt Each Day - Midweek wordle #8
and Ultimate Blog Challenge - Day #22
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  1. SoumyaJuly 22, 2015 at 6:24 PM

    Woooahhhhh! No wonder his son became a stranger to him!

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  2. Vinay Leo R.July 22, 2015 at 10:32 PM

    Ghostly. Wonder what was in the letter :D

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  3. RajJuly 23, 2015 at 1:08 AM

    Maybe a letter that took 10 years to reach

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  4. Siddhartha JoshiJuly 23, 2015 at 11:12 AM

    This is so intriguing! Imagining things that can happen next...

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  5. AnonymousJuly 23, 2015 at 7:32 PM

    oohh!! Spooky! A letter from the dead!

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  6. AnonymousJuly 23, 2015 at 7:32 PM

    oohh!! Spooky! A letter from the dead!

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  7. HopeJuly 30, 2015 at 6:40 PM

    hello Simran! it's always nice to visit you. Glad to see you are still writing! this is an intriguing write. I want to read more! Hope you are well!

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  8. JeevanAugust 4, 2015 at 3:06 PM

    It produces strange feel! Nice attempt

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~Simran

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