"There is something special about rains. When trees dance, flowers smile rejoicing and the stirring fragrant brew up; I feel a new self. As if nature has framed up a mirror for me to look at and reciprocate in the same way." Said Snigdha and ran towards the garden to meet the season's first shower.
Anand was mesmerized to see rains from a new perspective. In the chaos of life, earning hard and gathering luxuries he hardly ever noticed the joy of little things, the joy of letting go everything for a moment. Resting his left shoulder on the door he stood there motionless in admiration of Snigdha's carefree smile, those brown innocent eyes and tempting rose bud like moist lips. She had never looked this beautiful before.
"Anand, you are missing out life. Come and live it." She said with new enthusiasm.
Snigdha's words sounded like an ardent call. He ran smiling with his arms open. He closed his eyes and raised his head to feel the raindrops. He felt nourished. It was like, the drops of rain were washing away all his pain, long years of tiredness, guilt and grudges. Those grudges of not expressing his love for Snigdha, for the person she was and the place she had in his life.
" I feel, I have fallen for you, Snigdha", fumbled Anand.
Snigdha was awestruck to finally hear those words from Anand she had heard over thousands of times in her imagination. She couldn't believe her longing was finally coming true.
"Your silence is killing me. Say something, please. " A drop of tear escaped from the corner of her eye. She embraced him tightly as if to never let him go. "Buddhu, why did you take it so long to say this?"
"Because, today I realized "my life"... you and a beautiful journey waiting for us with more of love and rains." Said Anand kissing on her forehead.
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Hi Simran,
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful and pure! :)
I almost imagined the scene, m sure a lot of us wish to have experienced something as pure as love..and hearing those words from someone you love can be magical.
All the best for BAT55.
Regards,
Megha
Hi Megha,
DeleteLove indeed is the best feeling in the world and the warmth it brings is immeasurable. I am glad you could imagine my words. Thank you so much :) All the best to you as well.
Awwwwwww....
ReplyDeleteRains do have the power to bring out the unsaid :)
Indeed, Soumya :)
DeleteRains are delightful. Thanks.
A very beautiful post! Cuteeee!!!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Yay! Thank you, Sarav :D
DeleteSimple and sweet. A heart warming post.
ReplyDeletePlease do visit mine too and tell me what you think.
http://klishmaklaver.blogspot.in/2015/06/the-man-in-wall-mural.html
All the best for BAT 55..
Cheers
Vibz
Thank you so much, Vibhuti :)
DeleteWill stop by yours soon.
Awww...I could clearly visualize the drenching couples soaking with joy..Rain makes a heart GO Romantic😊
ReplyDeleteLovely...
ATB for BAT
Thank you, Panchali Maám. Good to see you after a long time :)
Deleteyou know as i read this its raining outside our home :) so beautiful :) love it simz <3 within 10 mins !! how can you write sooo well <3 proud of you <3
ReplyDeleteRain rejoice, you actually had :D Thank you sooo much Sachiiii ♥ I am super happy you loved it.
Deleteperhaps this is Aashiqui 3, a nice romantic take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteMy Blogaton55 entry The Monsoon Pain
Hahaha :D Could be Ishaqzade 2 :P
DeleteGlad that they realized they were meant to be :) Beautiful love story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dearo :D
DeleteBeautiful story.
ReplyDeleteThank you, aativas :)
DeleteHello simran. I finally managed to write this for you and for your plot. And believe me your plot worth this.
ReplyDeleteI'm really overwhelmed after zipping it through. The love story is to cute. The story is too simple and just describing the love for both the rain and his beloved. And how the rain has just encouraged him to propose his beloved.
I enjoyed reading.
Thank you.
I am happy that you enjoyed reading my story. Thank you, Subham :)
Deletevery sweet and i really love this concept of rain and romance :) very beautiful simran
ReplyDeleteRain is associated with tender feelings and deep emotions :)
DeleteThanks a lot friend :)
The power of romantic rains! Such a sweet post.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT!
Megha Haware - The garlic soup
Yeah, romantic rains :D
DeleteThank dear Megha :)
Chotti the more I read the more I fall in love with your writing. I wish you win this time. My vote is for you!
ReplyDeleteVidhya
That's a lovely compliment. Thanks dear, Vidhya di. It means a lot me :)
DeleteAh! I can feel love. So beautifully written, Simran. :) All the best for BAT 55.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you could feel love in the story, Namu :)
DeleteThank you.
This is so romantic :-)
ReplyDeleteRain does let emotions flow and the truth does come out...
ReplyDeleteWonderful post Simran...