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Dried are those leaves 
into an obscuring loop
that had been green once
The dark clouds mask over
celestial bodies, the moon 
and the stars
Mixture of dark in light
 the gleaming texture 
drab off its shine;
Close eyes can feel the dark
the emptiness inside!
Eclipse covering the moon 
turn off its bright light.

 Written for A to Z Challenge




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  1. Sachin PrabhuApril 4, 2015 at 11:29 PM

    with words you know how to create magic :) keep writing :)

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  2. The Solitary WriterApril 5, 2015 at 12:04 AM

    You are good with words..do you know that?

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  3. UnknownApril 5, 2015 at 7:44 AM

    Lovely poem! Thank you for sharing.

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  4. Devika FernandoApril 5, 2015 at 8:08 AM

    Great poem, reads almost like a song or a story!
    I chose to write a poem for D too, about Desire. http://www.devikafernando.com/blog/blogging-from-a-to-z-challenge-letter-d-desire

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  5. Ajay PaiApril 5, 2015 at 10:45 AM

    ahaa Simran! I guess, you were inspired by Chandragrahan (lunar eclipse) yesterday! Well written.

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  6. Swathi ShenoyApril 5, 2015 at 5:35 PM

    Lovely poem Simran :)

    Double Jeopardy

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  7. Jyotsna BhatiaApril 7, 2015 at 11:08 PM

    Good one Simran :)

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  8. Someone is SpecialApril 11, 2015 at 2:01 PM

    That's nature little one :)

    Someone is Special

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  9. beingFabApril 12, 2015 at 3:01 PM

    There's a feeling of darkness dripping through the poem!!

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