I am just another being
Dwelling on this wandering star
I know, you're not interested
Still I will precede, spar!
Last word doesn't justify me
Sweet, defines me better. No?
I am Fred, a fly
Don't raise up your brow
My wings flutter with grace
Drifts towards wherever it likes
A new venture to take
Cannot resist myself to hike
Who does not love temptation?
No different in my case
It feels good to see
a kid trying to embrace
Perhaps, my presence disturbs you
But then, I don't bother
Because you never did for me
Sweet music interrupt your slumber
Do you know reason behind?
Though humans are the wisest
Yet they are so oblivious
To remember, an aura, brightest
A mere planet of garbage
earth would be without me
Every creation of the God
Composed for A to Z Challenge
Please be my teacher and teach me how to write such sweet poems :-)
ReplyDeleteThat's a great compliment, Emerald :)
DeleteGlad you find them sweet. I'd love to help you in all possible ways and it will a be great process for both of to learn something from each other.
Thank you! :-)
haha fred is bound to be the most logical and not hated fly in the history! A very different and innovative thought...Nice one simi...:)
ReplyDeleteHe is so obstinate that you can not hate him even if you want to :D
DeleteThanks Vaisakhi :)
True, every creature has got some reason to exist. Very beautiful poem dear. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you find it beautiful, Namu :)
DeleteWas eager to know your views....thank you so much :)
Wow girl. That was a mature piece of writing. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Parvathy :) :)
Deletewow wow....beautiful,,how didu get all ideas simran...very talented u r..u should write one book sweetie
ReplyDeletemy recent one :http://www.indianbeautyforever.com/2014/04/bourjois-liner-feutre-eyeliner-pen.html
So sweet of you Teju :)
DeleteI'll surly write in future...
Thank you so much...great to have you around :)
Yes yes, Sims :) Please teach me to write such wonderful fly poems too.
ReplyDeleteKidding or what ??
DeleteI am learning that from you, Dearo :)
Beautiful poem Simi! The last stanza is wonderful and filled with wisdom. Every creation has its beauty and purpose...Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Valli :)
DeleteYour words are always inspiring to me.
Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteFred the fly is really a good guy!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked Fred :)
DeleteThank you!
Every creature in this world has a purpose and a reason behind his or her birth just like the fly…on reading your poem I felt that whatever you write will rock.
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Exactly :)
DeleteIf you'll keep reading me and encouraging me I'm sure I'll rock ! :)
Thanks di
Much love
Chotti