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This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 43; the forty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "LIGHT"
Green park,swings,colorful flowers.
Shashank see a beautiful butterfly, he run to catch and fall down. When he open his eyes, heart sink,completely blank.
What happen, Shashank?? Mum's here, you're safe. She hugs him tightly.
Let me switch on the light.I'll listen you.
In tears, ''Why God wrote my life without light?''

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Wish you all Happy and safe Diwali! :-)
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  1. SidNovember 3, 2013 at 8:18 PM

    Great message. Some grammatical errors could have had been prevented though.. :D

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  2. Vinay Leo R.November 4, 2013 at 11:26 AM

    Not your best work, Sims... but I like the short fiction. Maybe his light is different from ours, but it would still be there :)

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  3. Sreeja PraveenNovember 4, 2013 at 12:54 PM

    Life without a light is painful enough.... :(
    Sad for the Shashanks in the world :(
    Good piece, Simran :)

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  4. IreneNovember 4, 2013 at 9:31 PM

    This is sad, Simran... Wonderful post. ♡ :-)

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  5. UnknownNovember 4, 2013 at 10:42 PM

    That's a lovely story. Probably proof-reading from your end would have made into a great one.Don't be offended, because i loved your creative side. The last line was indeed great though.

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  6. TCPCNovember 5, 2013 at 12:00 PM

    Good idea well put in few words!

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  7. the little princessNovember 5, 2013 at 1:33 PM

    nice story... some errors grammatically..could be corrected.

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  8. CifarNovember 8, 2013 at 2:20 PM

    nice but not an effective one,

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  9. UnknownNovember 9, 2013 at 12:19 AM

    The concept was very nice.

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  10. Shashiprakash SainiNovember 10, 2013 at 1:59 AM

    मार्मिक रचना

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  11. aativasNovember 10, 2013 at 4:40 PM

    Nice story in few words!

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  12. Someone is SpecialNovember 10, 2013 at 8:37 PM

    I love the last line little one. Rest, I will text on Facebook :)

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