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With this melting candle wax she discovered her life smelting into cessation which was of iniquity since when he came into her life. His deceitful love which had a day life and it died! She's true and fragile from heart yet an oath she takes 'Tit for Tat' a wish 'Almighty please don't lemme break'
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ReplyDeleteSorry, because of less time I did post without my actual contest. You may read it now :-)
DeleteLet the almighty be with her... Liked your post little one....
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Special One liked my post ...Wow!! :D
DeleteThere is my win :-)
Thank you!
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Intriguing..
ReplyDeleteGlad it left you with fascination :-)
DeleteThanks, Asteria !
Betrayal lead to strong emotions .. and you have captured them very efficiently in just 55 words !
ReplyDeletevery well done dear ..
let the good work keep coming ! :D:D
True.. :)
DeleteGlad you liked it!
Thanks dear
So short... Yet sweet... :)
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DeleteThank you, Satya!
a women can be as strong as wishes to be....nice 55er.....though 'tit for tat' is not something i feel strongly about.
ReplyDeleteThat's true :-)
DeleteI honor your views dear...Thank you, Little princess! :-)
Tit for tat never works.. for the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'. At least for me ...
ReplyDelete'the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'.'
DeleteAbsolutely true!
But what about the person who intentionally hurt you and play with your emotions??
Is it right to curse yourself or to make the Casanova realize??
Still I welcome your views with honor..
Thank you dear
Tit for tat never works.. for the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'. At least for me.
ReplyDelete'the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'.'
DeleteAbsolutely true!
But what about the person who intentionally hurt you and play with your emotions??
Is it right to curse yourself or to make the Casanova realize??
Still I welcome your views with honor..
Thank you dear
Hey Sims, I don't know what to say here, you left me speechless...One of my very good friend is kind of in the same state, and when I was reading this, I was actually feeling her pain. Excellent job sweet heart, very amiable post for me. :)
ReplyDeleteThat's really sad to know dear...
DeleteHope the guy realize his mistake someday and may repent for the whole life for loosing the true love.
My God bless strength to your friend. Please tell her not to stop living her life..its short then why to make it lost??
Thanks dear...
Happy it left u speechless :-)
It will require strength to do "tit for tat" with one she fell in love with.
ReplyDeleteMay she be that strong :)
Beautiful.
Yes dearie, a lot of!
DeleteThank you :-) :-)
hurt, betrayal, strength, revenge...you captured it all... nice one :)
ReplyDeleteAll the Best for BAT :)
Welcome to M.F, Rhythm
DeleteGlad you liked it :-)
Thank you so much!
Oh I felt the pain, Simran. The emotions are too strong that even the victim of deceit wants revenge. Good job! :-)
ReplyDelete~Irene
In A Different Place
You felt my words exactly... thank you so much, Irene :)
DeleteLike it goes Till death do us apart!!
ReplyDeleteUthra Suresh- If only wishes were horses
thanks Uthra
DeleteTruly impressive!!
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DeleteDamn happy to impress you :D
Thanks!
Simple and Sweet. The melted wax is mirrored with the women's heart. A true 55ier..Good one
ReplyDelete- Vajra
Bingo!
DeleteYou pointed it exactly! :D
Thanks for stopping by, Vajra.
strong emotions :)
ReplyDeleteThat was imapactful, baby. A few words could do magic...ATB!!!:)
ReplyDeleteHappy to have you here, Panchali ji :-)
DeleteThat's true..Words have mystic magic :D
Thank you so much for the wishes!
Best wishes to u too.
छोटी पर सटीक और सुन्दर रचना
ReplyDeleteAapko meri rachna pasad aai..hardik prasannta hui..
Deletetahedil se dhanyawaad.
This 55er is an excellent portrayal of betrayal, vindictive-urge, strength-seeking-wish and dormant-hurt. Beautiful composition.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, binzy :)
Deleteconcise but said too much about the people,situation and story,very well written
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for stopping by Cifar :-)
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