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This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 40; the fortieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "MAKE A WISH"
With this melting candle wax she discovered her life smelting into cessation which was of iniquity since when he came into her life. His deceitful love which had a day life and it died! She's true and fragile from heart yet an oath she takes 'Tit for Tat' a wish 'Almighty please don't lemme break'

 The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. Participation Count: 07

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  1. Dilip PatelAugust 5, 2013 at 12:26 AM

    How come the story is missing?

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    1. SimranAugust 5, 2013 at 6:52 PM

      Sorry, because of less time I did post without my actual contest. You may read it now :-)

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  2. Someone is SpecialAugust 5, 2013 at 1:20 AM

    Let the almighty be with her... Liked your post little one....

    Someone is Special

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    1. SimranAugust 5, 2013 at 6:53 PM

      Special One liked my post ...Wow!! :D
      There is my win :-)

      Thank you!
      :-)

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  3. asteria's canvassAugust 5, 2013 at 1:40 AM

    Intriguing..

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    1. SimranAugust 5, 2013 at 6:54 PM

      Glad it left you with fascination :-)
      Thanks, Asteria !

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  4. AishwaryaAugust 5, 2013 at 1:56 AM

    Betrayal lead to strong emotions .. and you have captured them very efficiently in just 55 words !
    very well done dear ..
    let the good work keep coming ! :D:D

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  5. LocomenteAugust 5, 2013 at 6:59 AM

    So short... Yet sweet... :)

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  6. the little princessAugust 5, 2013 at 2:32 PM

    a women can be as strong as wishes to be....nice 55er.....though 'tit for tat' is not something i feel strongly about.

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    1. SimranAugust 5, 2013 at 6:58 PM

      That's true :-)
      I honor your views dear...Thank you, Little princess! :-)

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  7. AnonymousAugust 5, 2013 at 2:54 PM

    Tit for tat never works.. for the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'. At least for me ...

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    1. SimranAugust 5, 2013 at 7:02 PM

      'the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'.'

      Absolutely true!
      But what about the person who intentionally hurt you and play with your emotions??
      Is it right to curse yourself or to make the Casanova realize??

      Still I welcome your views with honor..
      Thank you dear

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  8. AnonymousAugust 5, 2013 at 2:57 PM

    Tit for tat never works.. for the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'. At least for me.

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    1. SimranAugust 5, 2013 at 7:02 PM

      'the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'.'

      Absolutely true!
      But what about the person who intentionally hurt you and play with your emotions??
      Is it right to curse yourself or to make the Casanova realize??

      Still I welcome your views with honor..
      Thank you dear

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  9. Ayushi Pratit KhareAugust 5, 2013 at 8:59 PM

    Hey Sims, I don't know what to say here, you left me speechless...One of my very good friend is kind of in the same state, and when I was reading this, I was actually feeling her pain. Excellent job sweet heart, very amiable post for me. :)

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    1. SimranAugust 6, 2013 at 9:17 PM

      That's really sad to know dear...
      Hope the guy realize his mistake someday and may repent for the whole life for loosing the true love.

      My God bless strength to your friend. Please tell her not to stop living her life..its short then why to make it lost??

      Thanks dear...
      Happy it left u speechless :-)

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  10. Ph_August 6, 2013 at 12:45 AM

    It will require strength to do "tit for tat" with one she fell in love with.
    May she be that strong :)
    Beautiful.

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  11. RJAugust 6, 2013 at 6:27 PM

    hurt, betrayal, strength, revenge...you captured it all... nice one :)
    All the Best for BAT :)

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    1. SimranAugust 6, 2013 at 9:19 PM

      Welcome to M.F, Rhythm

      Glad you liked it :-)
      Thank you so much!

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  12. IreneAugust 6, 2013 at 10:18 PM

    Oh I felt the pain, Simran. The emotions are too strong that even the victim of deceit wants revenge. Good job! :-)

    ~Irene
    In A Different Place

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    1. SimranAugust 10, 2013 at 1:41 PM

      You felt my words exactly... thank you so much, Irene :)

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  13. Uthra SureshAugust 7, 2013 at 4:55 PM

    Like it goes Till death do us apart!!

    Uthra Suresh- If only wishes were horses


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  14. JeevanAugust 7, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    Truly impressive!!

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  15. VajraAugust 8, 2013 at 12:58 PM

    Simple and Sweet. The melted wax is mirrored with the women's heart. A true 55ier..Good one
    - Vajra

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    1. SimranAugust 10, 2013 at 1:43 PM

      Bingo!
      You pointed it exactly! :D
      Thanks for stopping by, Vajra.

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  16. संजय भास्‍कर August 8, 2013 at 5:24 PM

    strong emotions :)

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  17. PanchaliAugust 8, 2013 at 9:47 PM

    That was imapactful, baby. A few words could do magic...ATB!!!:)

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    1. SimranAugust 10, 2013 at 1:46 PM

      Happy to have you here, Panchali ji :-)

      That's true..Words have mystic magic :D
      Thank you so much for the wishes!
      Best wishes to u too.

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  18. Shashiprakash SainiAugust 8, 2013 at 10:19 PM

    छोटी पर सटीक और सुन्दर रचना

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    1. SimranAugust 10, 2013 at 1:47 PM

      Aapko meri rachna pasad aai..hardik prasannta hui..
      tahedil se dhanyawaad.

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  19. AnonymousAugust 10, 2013 at 6:30 AM

    This 55er is an excellent portrayal of betrayal, vindictive-urge, strength-seeking-wish and dormant-hurt. Beautiful composition.

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  20. CifarAugust 10, 2013 at 5:26 PM

    concise but said too much about the people,situation and story,very well written

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    1. SimranAugust 18, 2013 at 1:11 AM

      Thank you so much for stopping by Cifar :-)

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