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My free fall emotions

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Am sensitive to express
what I feel or think
Sometimes I realize
I shouldn't have said this
but, my free fall emotions

My inner world has shaken
drown into a vivacity
that has everything but
deplore of satisfaction 
my free fall emotions

A fierce fire ball 
Impatient, at situation
things aren't going
the way they should
but, my free fall emotions says

I have to make my step forward
I have to challenge the wrong
when many of us are acting as puppets
I want myself to listen my soul and follow 
my free fall emotions

 Dear Almighty, please help me...  
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  1. Ph_July 3, 2013 at 9:58 PM

    That is going to be worth an experience, once just trusting your "free fall emotions" yourself and doing what is right for you!
    I will the same then :)

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    1. SimranJuly 18, 2013 at 8:46 PM

      I am following my free fall emotions and believe me it proved a right decision to me.
      :-)
      Following your heart is truly satisfying.
      Thanks Dearie!

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  2. JeevanJuly 4, 2013 at 1:38 PM

    Not everything moves as we wish... sometime it needs some force to push from our side or the other. I can understand your situation and I only hope you lead a better way.

    Well written Simran :)

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  3. Someone is SpecialJuly 4, 2013 at 3:21 PM

    Please follow little one.. Let the God be with you!

    Someone is Special

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    1. SimranJuly 18, 2013 at 8:48 PM

      I am following! :-)
      Thank you my Special One! <3

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  4. UnknownJuly 5, 2013 at 9:37 AM

    Giving in to a free fall of emotions-- only brings me nostalgia, it was long ago I did any of that.

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    1. SimranJuly 18, 2013 at 8:49 PM

      I'd suggest you to do that once again :)
      Thanks, Damyanti!

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  5. deepsJuly 6, 2013 at 11:00 PM

    emotions are like that...
    thats why
    life is like that :P

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  6. deepsJuly 6, 2013 at 11:03 PM

    emotions are like that
    and thats why
    life is like that :)

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  7. Gayatri SoniJuly 7, 2013 at 5:32 PM

    Keep it up! :)

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  8. Rahul BhatiaJuly 8, 2013 at 2:55 PM

    Listen to your soul and follow your emotions! So true, Simran:)

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  9. संजय भास्‍कर July 10, 2013 at 6:29 PM

    I am speechless JSimran ji. Brilliant piece of writing.

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    1. SimranJuly 18, 2013 at 8:51 PM

      Thank you so much Sanjay for the constant encouragement :)
      Glad you liked it!
      Keep stopping by!

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  10. Jyoti MishraJuly 12, 2013 at 12:13 PM

    emotions.. they do free fall.
    just beyond your control radar..

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  11. Kalyan PanjaJuly 13, 2013 at 10:30 AM

    lovely words...nice poignant lines!

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  12. Amrit SinhaJuly 18, 2013 at 12:06 PM

    That is what emotions are :-)

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