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The murky eve

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While walking today
below the dusky eve sky
had many things to do
but I realized to be in
sole and meet my own-self

Is much more important 
In this world of attraction
or other foremost priorities 
I almost stopped giving 
it myself

Maybe that's the reason 
my poetic expressions hardly comes out,
 while writing this, I know still it's not
that poetic as it used to be 
not that rhythmic

Yet I'll never ever let lost
my passion, poetry!
Today somehow my blue inner world
quoth in solicitous ace
to get my pamper

The murky eve illuminated pessimist 
in me, 'again the world is ready
 to get lost in the evil darkness'
yet another day in its grip!!
No one can direct nature
But nature does

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  1. sulaiman saitJune 14, 2013 at 4:51 PM

    Good one
    very well written , the last two stanzas were excellent
    Keep up with the good work

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    1. SimranJune 14, 2013 at 6:09 PM

      Glad you liked it! :)
      Thanks for stopping by and encouraging.

      Best wishes to you dear..

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  2. Ph_June 14, 2013 at 10:39 PM

    made sense to me :)

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  3. Gayatri SoniJune 15, 2013 at 4:03 PM

    So, just keep boosting your confidence, dear! :)

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  4. Someone is SpecialJune 16, 2013 at 4:51 PM

    Nature does... Love the way you penned this little one :)

    Someone is Special

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  5. JeevanJune 16, 2013 at 4:59 PM

    Wow! Loved the last stanza a lot. Brilliant write up Simran! I wish the passion for poetry never dies in you :)

    My best wishes

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  6. Saru SinghalJune 16, 2013 at 8:10 PM

    That's quite intense. BTW, why the change? Also, poetry should come from heart, don't worry about rhyme and meter. I guess, days are not that merry on your side.

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    1. SimranJune 21, 2013 at 7:21 PM

      Here rhyme means : my poetry is not coming directly from heart as it used to come.
      Thanks for stopping by dear :-)

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  7. Jyoti MishraJune 16, 2013 at 10:12 PM

    you'll do just fine on all murky eves Simran.. :)

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    1. SimranJune 21, 2013 at 7:22 PM

      Sweet of you!
      Your words make me confident.Thanks a lot!

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  8. Amrit SinhaJune 19, 2013 at 9:26 PM

    This is a real beauty, and the last two lines "No one can direct nature But nature does" ... just WOW !!!

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    1. SimranJune 21, 2013 at 7:22 PM

      Happy to listen a WOW!!! from you :D
      That's my award!

      Thank you so much.

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  9. संजय भास्‍कर June 28, 2013 at 8:53 PM

    Brilliant write Simran ji

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