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In this serene rain

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No matter how much the things go wrong to me

No matter how depress I feel or lost

A touch of cool wind I perceive in silence

Ventilate my heart accumulated with

Uncountable worries & unexplained feelings

I close my eyes as to feel each and every drop of

This serene rain, my own spiritual believe

That touches me; the feeling of lost evades in silence

No more solitary, Nature accompanies me to consort

And that too with ''Loyalty''.


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  1. Ph_June 5, 2013 at 1:38 AM

    I love the ending more "that too with loyalty"
    So perfect with words Simran, one day I wish to rhyme as fluently as you do.

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    1. SimranJune 5, 2013 at 5:42 PM

      I am happy, you got it exactly what I wanted to convey through the single word Loyalty...
      Thanks for the appreciation, I'm flying :D

      You already rhyme so beautiful dear ..even better than me :)

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  2. Gayatri SoniJune 6, 2013 at 10:52 PM

    Lovely lines! Keep smiling! :)

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  3. LocomenteJune 7, 2013 at 3:33 PM

    Hii Simran... beautiful blog u hv!!and I am amazed 2 find sm1 who share similar thot process like I do...

    N nature is the best friend one cn have.... a loyal one indeed!

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    1. SimranJune 7, 2013 at 7:42 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Satya

      Hi,
      I was waiting from so long for you visit :-)
      Glad we have something in common...Yes, nature will be always the loyal one than this fake world and its ppl!

      I am reallyyyy happy to receive your comment...
      Thank u so much
      Stay Smiling & Happy Blogging

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  4. Someone is SpecialJune 16, 2013 at 4:57 PM

    Yes it comes with loyalty.. :)

    Someone is Special

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