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Momentary Escape

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Rushing her loitering steps
breaking the walls of Qualm
for today she comprehended 
the verity of Life ; Momentary Escape
getting abscond by each passing flash
of nothing but lingering memories that would remain
stressed her soul and mind being nostalgic 
when clashed to her obscure reverie 
an air of vigilance awaken her 
with a little message, worth for a life 
''Life is short then why to make it lost?''

 Written for- Bluebell Books
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Rain : Music
Friendship : God's Gift
Blogging : Writings
Morning : New Start
Teddies : Cute
Black : dark
Pillow : sound sleep
Cricket : excitement
Fashion : Bore
Winter : Shiver

Written for Word-O-Logy at Coveted Dreams



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  1. Tanya SehgalOctober 23, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    Excellent poetry :) Thanks for participating in the Word-O-Logy dear Simran :) You are such a talented sweet dear I tell you ! :) Glad to have a friend like you ! Take care :)

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:02 PM

      I always have excitement to read your comments.. Glad you liked :)
      Word-O-Logy is such a fun game. I'm loving it! :)
      Cheers for our Amity! Thank you so much
      Lots of Love and Care..

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  2. Tanya SehgalOctober 23, 2012 at 9:30 PM

    An innocent escape I guess :)Cute message brought to notice. Live your life as if it's the last, such detailing in few lines. You are an expert poet. A cognitive perspective!

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:05 PM

      Yes, you can perfectly call it as an Innocent Escape.This composition is inter- related to many things.We can discuss in detail, personally if you like :)
      Thank you so much for blessing me with such beautiful compliments. They makes my day! :) :)

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  3. Amrit SinhaOctober 23, 2012 at 11:37 PM

    The poetry is beautiful as always --- you bring out strong meanings in each of your work ... well done !!!

    PS: I too am participating in Word-o-Logy. Nice choice of words :-)

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:08 PM

      Glad reading your words, Amrit :)
      Thank you so much buddy!

      I've checked yours.. Lovely attempt! :D

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  4. PanchaliOctober 24, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    Beautiful poetry, dear Simran...!Somehow I flowed with the lines...:))
    The words you chose for playing the game were meaningful and appropriate..:))Well done!

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:12 PM

      I am so happpyyyyyyyy to have you here, Dear Panchali! :)
      You writes wonder, I must say! :) :)
      So happy you liked and felt my words deeply. And I read yours.. Lovely played :)

      Cheers!

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  5. BikramOctober 24, 2012 at 5:08 PM

    oh yes Live each moment as it will be last .. LIFE is short and it is running away fastttttttttttttttttttt


    beautiful lines simran :)

    Bikram's

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:14 PM

      ''Apna har pal aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho..'' :)
      I agree, everyone should have the same attitude towards their life!

      Ahaaa, I see Bikram your words getting poetic :)
      Thank you so much !!

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  6. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 7:05 PM

    Hi Simmy! I love you dear. :">

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  7. Gayatri SoniOctober 24, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    poem with a message, hmmmm...... ;) keep going!

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  8. AnonymousOctober 24, 2012 at 8:05 PM

    this is very enjoyable.

    colorful and stunning poetry.

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:15 PM

      Happy you enjoyed my words, Janet!
      Thank you so much for stopping by..

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  9. JeevanOctober 24, 2012 at 8:10 PM

    Beautiful write up with emphasis! Life is short and let it be sweet for you and all :)

    Best wishes dear

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  10. AnonymousOctober 24, 2012 at 9:04 PM

    escaping from reality for a short break is cool.
    love the dynamic imagery in your words.

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  11. Cindy Gary Murray Tomblin BullockOctober 24, 2012 at 9:34 PM

    love your theme,

    elegant imagery.

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  12. AnonymousOctober 24, 2012 at 9:57 PM

    powerful memo.
    love it.

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  13. Abbey Michael Boyle Blount FallinOctober 24, 2012 at 10:16 PM

    exceptional.

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  14. AnonymousOctober 24, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    your blog is wonderful, the background music is fun,
    your poem is well done.

    cheers.

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:19 PM

      Happy you liked the blog, music and the poem :) :)
      Thanks a lot, Ihop!

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  15. AnonymousOctober 25, 2012 at 12:48 AM

    your words hook,
    masterful write.

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:19 PM

      Glad reading your words, Dear Aya :)
      Thank you so much.

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  16. vinayOctober 25, 2012 at 12:58 PM

    Beautifully crafted words. :)

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:20 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Vinay!

      Glad you found it beautiful :)
      Thank you so much.

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  17. AmitAagOctober 25, 2012 at 2:16 PM

    Very beautiful!

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  18. deepsOctober 26, 2012 at 12:19 PM

    there is a touch of philosophy in all ur poems

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 3:21 PM

      Now that's a huge compliment for me! Thank you so much Deeps :) :)

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  19. Always UnluckyOctober 26, 2012 at 4:43 PM

    My family members every time say that I am killing my time here at net, however I know I am getting know-how every day by reading such nice posts. From Harry

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    1. SimranOctober 26, 2012 at 10:57 PM

      Glad you find my writings reading worth! :)
      Thank you so much...

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  20. gunjan kumarOctober 26, 2012 at 11:35 PM

    nice one ,,,cherished it

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    1. SimranOctober 27, 2012 at 9:03 AM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Gunjan
      Glad you cherished my words :)
      Thank you so much. Keep stopping by!

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  21. SwarnaliOctober 28, 2012 at 8:25 PM

    I loved your poem!! Its amazingly lyrical...thanks for dropping by my blog :) Am your 170th Follower :)
    Dreams n Drama

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    1. SimranOctober 30, 2012 at 9:04 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Swarnali!

      I am delighted to know that you liked the composition :)
      Excited to have you my friend... Hope to receive your constant support!
      Lots of Love!
      Happy Blogging to you...

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  22. Ashna October 28, 2012 at 9:13 PM

    Nice poem!

    And liked the word association. They're somewhat, no, totally, realistic. I like that thing! :)

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  23. UnknownOctober 29, 2012 at 2:27 PM

    the arranged words as poetry are awesome.. keep up the same spirit throught.. :)

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    1. SimranOctober 30, 2012 at 9:07 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Sravanth

      Thank you so much for such sweet words :)
      Keep dropping by!

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  24. SimranOctober 30, 2012 at 8:53 PM

    Welcome To My Friendship, Bijyaylaxmi

    Glad having you here. thanks for dropping by :)

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  25. Someone is SpecialNovember 8, 2012 at 11:06 PM

    Life is short.. Very beautifully written :) :) :)

    Someone is Special

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    1. SimranNovember 10, 2012 at 6:06 PM

      @Special One

      I am super glad you found it beautiful .. :)
      SmileS

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