agile and remorse
the flow of twinge within
tears refuse to cease
Heartbeats goes agile
adrenalin rush of wild
when I think of you
Written For
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
The 2nd haiku is ohh so romantic ... loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Amrit! :)
DeleteI can understand the thought of my heartbeat going agile. That is certainly what it feels like at times.
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteThanks Ellecee.
Little One..♥
ReplyDeleteadrenalin rush...? Hmmm liked it
Someone is Special
Special One ♥
DeleteGlad you liked. Here I mentioned about two contrasting emotions and I hope to bring the same for each of the Haiku I participate for! :)
Thanks Buddy! :)
beautiful words Simran....
ReplyDeleteHappy to have you here :)
DeleteThank you so much!
When I'm in my blues and very moody, that second haiku I can relate to in terms of chocolate ;)
ReplyDeleteP.S: What have you done to my dearo's blog? It looks so... plain :P
Hahah..relating the second one with choco!
DeleteCute, I say :D
Ready to makeover :)
Love hurts?
ReplyDeleteLove does not hurt always but it does!
DeleteThe so called Complex Love~
I loved the second bit more. Very impressive work Simran :)
ReplyDeleteAfter so long you visited! Where were you Saru? Was missing you...
DeleteGlad to make you enchant by my verses and Haiku :) :)
Thank you so much buddy!!
yeah, I am in the league too.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved the second part of the haiku,Also the contradicting elements you presented here! :):)
Hmm...so many likes for the second one! Glad you noticed the contradiction I tried to reflect :)
DeleteThanks :)