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Haiku : Agile

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agile and remorse   
the flow of twinge within
tears refuse to cease 


Heartbeats goes agile
adrenalin rush of wild
when I think of you

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September Heights - Day07 - P#166 - Agile

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  1. Amrit SinhaSeptember 8, 2012 at 12:52 AM

    The 2nd haiku is ohh so romantic ... loved it :-)

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  2. ElleceeSeptember 8, 2012 at 2:56 AM

    I can understand the thought of my heartbeat going agile. That is certainly what it feels like at times.

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  3. Someone is SpecialSeptember 8, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    Little One..♥

    adrenalin rush...? Hmmm liked it

    Someone is Special

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    1. SimranSeptember 8, 2012 at 11:06 AM

      Special One ♥

      Glad you liked. Here I mentioned about two contrasting emotions and I hope to bring the same for each of the Haiku I participate for! :)
      Thanks Buddy! :)

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  4. IrfanuddinSeptember 8, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    beautiful words Simran....

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  5. Vinay Leo R.September 8, 2012 at 8:52 PM

    When I'm in my blues and very moody, that second haiku I can relate to in terms of chocolate ;)

    P.S: What have you done to my dearo's blog? It looks so... plain :P

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    1. SimranSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:24 AM

      Hahah..relating the second one with choco!
      Cute, I say :D

      Ready to makeover :)

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  6. Ph_September 9, 2012 at 10:52 AM

    Love hurts?

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    1. SimranSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:26 AM

      Love does not hurt always but it does!
      The so called Complex Love~

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  7. Saru SinghalSeptember 15, 2012 at 3:53 AM

    I loved the second bit more. Very impressive work Simran :)

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    1. SimranSeptember 15, 2012 at 6:17 PM

      After so long you visited! Where were you Saru? Was missing you...
      Glad to make you enchant by my verses and Haiku :) :)
      Thank you so much buddy!!

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  8. AishwaryaSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:52 PM

    yeah, I am in the league too.
    Absolutely loved the second part of the haiku,Also the contradicting elements you presented here! :):)

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    1. SimranSeptember 30, 2012 at 9:45 PM

      Hmm...so many likes for the second one! Glad you noticed the contradiction I tried to reflect :)


      Thanks :)

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