The beauty of hairs Attracts and capture the attention of every stare, But it is hard to nourish and to give proper care Busy schedule and outings makes them dull and shiny rare, My beauty is evading away... I'm aware! Nothing is with me that can sooth me or do fair justice with my thin hairs Then I recapitulated the famous saying: ''Love is a two way street: Love your hair and it loves you back'' Searching all around I found the trustworthy Dove, I pampered my hairs and said, don’t worry now it's Dove for you to love, And the day I started this beautiful journey of Dove's Love, I found a brand new day waiting for me to see my true colors of pulchritude Embraced me within its charm and defined me with a unique personality! Restoring the softness It nourished my dry hairs, Now my hairs fall very rare, They can feel the fresh air, Dove lengthen my hairs With eternal shine and strength Though I don't have much time for my hairs But hav...
And yet again your words knocked my senses .... You are the Queen of Haiku, truly :-)
ReplyDeleteYeyyy! Glad I made it again :D
DeleteThanks for the title! I am honored! :) :)
Nicde words, Simran!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Rahul ji :)
Deletebeautiful words simran.. and you have used them so well
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Glad you felt my words beautiful! thank you so much :)
Deleteawesome verses and picture! nice series on haiku simran :)
ReplyDeletebest wishes
Glad u liked :)
DeleteThat's my dream place!Wish I could go there ... thank you :)
you r good at it..
ReplyDeleteexpressing much with minimum words :)
Thanks Jyoti :)
DeleteI can never be good in poetry and write ups, as much as you are :)
ReplyDeleteThat's not true! you are too good in your writings :)
Deletethat's the reason I find out time to read your posts even in my busy schedule.. :)
Keep Writing and thank you so much for the compliment! :)
Lots of Love!
wow simran .... Beautiful words ~~
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Yeyyy! :)
DeleteThanks Anu :)
Happy to have your encouraging words!
Thank you so much.
too good for words yet again, Simran. you're truly a poetry empress. take care, dear <3 :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much irene for appreciating my poetry :)
DeleteArt of writing poetry is truly a gift in my life!
Thank you so much <3 :)
nice .. though i used dictionary to understand the meaning... but your words are good... and background score is amazing too...
ReplyDeleteThanks anuj :)
DeletePleasure to have you. I read your Hindi poems. They are beautiful!
Keep writing :)
Lovely set of haiku Simi...Serene and beautiful
ReplyDeleteSimi...missing you a lot dear....whr r u?
Hi Valli,
DeleteGlad you felt the serenity in my words.
Me too miss you a lot! Hmm.. again my exams are about to start! My first Boards. Working hard for it. Need your wishes :)
How are you doing??
Will be in touch through mails :)
Lots of Love!
Best Wishes!
Hi Simran! :) What a lovely words from your lovely heart! :) I love it all!:) Keep sharing! Missed you and your blog Simran! :) Hugs!
ReplyDeleteHi Sagittarian,
DeleteThat's really sweet of you dear :)
Glad you loved it! Hmm.. Same here! Great, you are back..
Hugs! you too keep blogging!
Thumbs up Simran! I like it!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear for your love and encouraging words :)
Deletemeans a lot to me :)
Stay Smiling ya!
beautiful ! i absolutely loved the words ...
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked , TTT :)
DeleteThanks
This was lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, PhilO :)
DeleteGlad to have you here...
Beautifully expressed....
ReplyDeleteWelcome to My Friendship, Krishna
DeleteGlad you found it beautiful :)
Thanks!
Spectacularly portrayed. Nice blog here, your haiku says a thousand words
ReplyDeleteWelcome to My Friendship , Tanya
DeleteGlad my words reached to you :)
Thank you so much dear ..
The pleasure is mine dear. Take care :) Happy Blogging
DeleteNice blog, you write great :)
ReplyDeleteHappy you liked the blog and my creations :)
DeleteHope to see you again, Tanya
Thank you
I like the eloquent free verse ~ Nice one ~
ReplyDeleteWelcome once again Grace to My Friendship after a long time :)
DeleteGlad you liked! Thanks Dear :)
cool simran
ReplyDeleteThanks Shona :)
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