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Aesthetic curlicue in colors 
flourished on this cosmos certain boundaries with contour
disseminate the charm; the nature's flair
an everlasting state of the art endowed we eulogize 
but at the same time we denounce its sway of reign
sometimes because of faux pas 
or because of avarice!
We dwell in this then why so detached ?

  

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  1. Ph_September 30, 2012 at 12:28 AM

    Yes, we do!!!

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  2. Amrit SinhaSeptember 30, 2012 at 12:35 AM

    Lovely words there !!!

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  3. UnknownSeptember 30, 2012 at 1:35 AM

    such beautiful use of words, Simran! Bravo for your beautiful thoughts! :)

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    1. SimranSeptember 30, 2012 at 9:52 PM

      Happy to have you back Pallavi :)
      Thank you so much for compliments ...they inspire me express more and more.

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  4. JeevanSeptember 30, 2012 at 4:59 PM

    Beautiful composition with deep thoughts of odor! Well written Simran.

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    1. SimranSeptember 30, 2012 at 9:56 PM

      Glad to know you felt beauty and odor my words :)
      Its always my pleasure to have such a Wonderful blogger and a reader..Thank you so much dear :)

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  5. IrfanuddinSeptember 30, 2012 at 7:34 PM

    so much you said in these few words Simran...

    Wonderful words....:)

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    1. SimranSeptember 30, 2012 at 9:57 PM

      Glad to have you here... Welcome! :)

      Words are always strong when used aptly.. Happy I did ! :)
      Thank you so much...

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  6. Sri ValliSeptember 30, 2012 at 9:18 PM

    Very thoughtful writing Simi!...I loved the ending question...So powerful!

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    1. SimranSeptember 30, 2012 at 9:59 PM

      That question is for sensitive people towards the natural nature like you , Valli :)

      Cheers! you liked you found it Powerful :)
      Thanks!

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  7. ashokSeptember 30, 2012 at 11:04 PM

    lovely!

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  8. Tanya SehgalOctober 1, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    Every piece of poetry from your side that I come across is immensely beautiful. Such a mature outlook to issues is rare to find these days. Take care little angel.


    Love
    Tanya

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    1. SimranOctober 2, 2012 at 8:53 PM

      And I am glad to receive such sweet and appreciating comments from you :)
      Thank you so much!

      Care and Love!

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  9. Gayatri SoniOctober 1, 2012 at 2:13 PM

    It's beautifully written with beautiful words!

    But....I got baffled to get your words with your first 3 lines.I think if they would have been segregated into 2 lines:
    "aesthetic curlicue in colors flourished on this cosmos
    certain boundaries with contour disseminate the charm;......"

    then, it would be more lovely!
    Hope,you don't mind!
    :)

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    1. SimranOctober 2, 2012 at 8:54 PM

      I won't mind but appreciate your suggestion.. I think I should go for the change you suggested :)

      Thanks a lot!

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  10. ShilpaOctober 1, 2012 at 2:46 PM

    Lovely explored the beauty in words dear Simran :)
    The photo is bewitching... Thanks so much for the visit and comment.

    Hugs n Kisses

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    1. SimranOctober 2, 2012 at 8:56 PM

      Glad you liked my exploration and found this piece of poetry beautiful! :)
      Thanks, Shilpa

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  11. Anupama K. MazumderOctober 1, 2012 at 3:22 PM

    We are too busy to appreciate nature around us, isnt it?

    www.anucreations.blogspot.in
    www.facebook.com/VolatileSpirits

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    1. SimranOctober 2, 2012 at 8:57 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship , Anupama

      We are actually!
      Thanks for stopping by :)

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  12. deepsOctober 1, 2012 at 6:11 PM

    life is like that :)

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    1. SimranOctober 2, 2012 at 8:58 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, deeps

      Well if you are comparing it with life than I would like to have your thoughts in explanation..
      Thanks for the visit :)

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  13. Always UnluckyOctober 2, 2012 at 5:00 PM

    I have read a few good stuff here. Superb message, I seriously count on updates from you. From India

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    1. SimranOctober 2, 2012 at 9:00 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Always Unlucky (Well I guess, that Isn't true)

      Glad you liked the message I conveyed here. Thanks

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    2. Always UnluckyOctober 3, 2012 at 12:09 PM

      Thank's for you visit and comment back Thank's once again
      plz visit and share following link Shocking images

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    3. Always UnluckyOctober 4, 2012 at 1:40 PM

      Can we follow each other
      it's all about humanity

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  14. smOctober 3, 2012 at 2:47 PM

    beautiful poem
    your template looks beautiful

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  15. BikramOctober 5, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    well done little one ..

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  16. Someone is SpecialOctober 6, 2012 at 6:47 PM

    Little one that was awesome.. I loved it :)

    Someone is Special

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    1. SimranOctober 8, 2012 at 6:04 PM

      Glad you loved it :)
      Happyyyyyy
      Thanks a lot!

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  17. provoqdOctober 12, 2012 at 2:24 AM

    Beautiful words Simran :)
    So, is the seasonal shift inspiration behind this post? :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. SimranOctober 12, 2012 at 9:12 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Jay

      Glad you liked and found it beautiful. Well, truly that's an attachment to nature that inspired me.
      Thanks a lot for such encouraging words ! :)

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  18. AmitAagOctober 13, 2012 at 11:31 AM

    Absolutely beautiful, Simran!

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  19. AnonymousOctober 13, 2012 at 12:14 PM

    Beautiful:)

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