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The Rain Delight

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Closing my eyes
With open heart and open arms
 I'm eager to welcome the beautiful rain
 To grasp it tightly within...
In optimism that it will ameliorate my sored heart
 And shattered dreams
Gazing at sky, hope in my eyes...
Searching clouds of dusky white
My urging lips and conscience
''Make this deserted heart revive''
Though the drizzle makes vociferous sound
 But it assures me that you are coming to the ground!
The hue of rainbow makes me feel the delight;
Enlighten my hopes and the way of destiny's bright.
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  1. ArtiJuly 15, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Wonderfully written Simran!!
    The joy of welcoming the rain and wishing that it washes away all our pain and takes away our sadness is beautifully written in this...
    Wish you a happy Sunday:)

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    1. SimranJuly 19, 2012 at 2:32 PM

      Thank you so much Arti dear for a lovely comment! :)
      Happy you liked it!
      Take care
      Wishing you have a wonderful day too!

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  2. Sri ValliJuly 15, 2012 at 12:21 PM

    Very beautiful poem on rain....Optimistic thoughts..!

    I loved your new look of blog....especially header...

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    1. SimranJuly 19, 2012 at 2:34 PM

      I love rain...so there is a natural beauty direct from my heart! :)
      Thanks!

      Awww :)
      Happy you liked the new look and header ..actually I was confused whether its looking better than before or need to make some changes. But thanks to you! :)
      Will keep it the same now!
      Lots of Love to u Vallz

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  3. JeevanJuly 15, 2012 at 2:18 PM

    Beautiful, as well significant! Loved the way it showed your heart :)

    Enjoy the monsoon delight, dear.
    Best wishes

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    1. SimranJuly 22, 2012 at 11:44 PM

      :) :)

      You too enjoy the Monsoon Delight! :)
      Thank you so much dear!

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  4. Someone is SpecialJuly 15, 2012 at 2:23 PM

    The delight in your words cannot be complimented by my words.. Keep writing Little One..

    Read your octave the other day, beautiful attempt, hoping to read more from your pen..

    Someone is Special

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    1. SimranJuly 22, 2012 at 11:47 PM

      I am flying!! Thanks Special One :) :)

      Hmm..that was my first octave. Will write more and more and also some new patterns of writing after exams.
      Sure will make you read much more wonders from my pen :)
      SmileS

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    2. Someone is SpecialAugust 7, 2012 at 6:25 PM

      I read wonders today Little One.. Smiles..

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    3. SimranAugust 8, 2012 at 7:40 PM

      :)

      Glad!

      SmileS Special One :) :)

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  5. LouiseJuly 15, 2012 at 6:06 PM

    This is beautiful, Simran...lovely words :)

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  6. Amrit SinhaJuly 15, 2012 at 8:08 PM

    What a way to welcome the rain ... lovely imagery !!!

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    1. SimranJuly 24, 2012 at 6:11 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Green Speck

      Glad you liked! Thanks :)

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  7. Saru SinghalJuly 15, 2012 at 11:58 PM

    Beautiful!

    Drenched in the beauty of these lovely words!!!

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    1. SimranJuly 24, 2012 at 6:12 PM

      Awww :)
      Thank you so much ,Saru!
      Happy to know that... :)

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  8. CYNOSUREJuly 16, 2012 at 1:16 AM

    A very beautiful composition by the Little Mistress...
    superb one dear...
    last two lines said it all...
    "The hue of rainbow makes me feel the delight;
    Enlighten my hopes and the way of destiny's bright."
    loved the ending... :)

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    1. SimranJuly 24, 2012 at 6:14 PM

      Reading your comment is no less than a delight!
      Thanks Sarab! :) :)

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  9. Prasoon KhareJuly 16, 2012 at 1:37 AM

    Wow!! What use of words.. :) Loved it!!

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  10. Prasoon KhareJuly 16, 2012 at 1:38 AM

    Wow!! What a wonderful use of words.. Excellent :)

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  11. Prasoon KhareJuly 16, 2012 at 1:39 AM

    Wow!! What a wonderful use of words.. Excellent :)

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  12. Melissa TandocJuly 16, 2012 at 6:27 PM

    It sounds so invigorating little one :D I delight in the rain too ;)

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  13. Gayatri SoniJuly 16, 2012 at 11:09 PM

    good one! hope your deserted heart would have revived :)

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  14. BikramJuly 17, 2012 at 10:02 PM

    simran , bahut wadhiya likhiya.. maja aa gaya padh ke .. bahut khooob



    Open letter to all -Bikram's

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  15. IreneJuly 19, 2012 at 4:38 AM

    Beautiful. Welcoming the rain with your heart full of glee <3 :-)

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  16. Ph_July 22, 2012 at 3:29 AM

    First of all I looooooooovvvvveeee the image you've shared! <3 <3 <3
    And this poem simply describes me. My hope, my escape is rain!
    I wait for rains to drain everything that is in my mind for long and everything that has been depressing me.
    I just love rains.
    Excellent post Simran! :)

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    1. SimranJuly 24, 2012 at 7:30 PM

      Kudos!
      We love rain!! :)
      Glad you liked! Thanksssss

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  17. SimranJuly 22, 2012 at 11:47 PM

    Thanks :)

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