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The Key Of My Heart

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No matter how far you are to me
you are in my heart!
A sacred place 
where my secrets lay
hidden in verses and tunes
locked deep within
You have that key esoterically
From the time
when you played 
those tunes of love for me lastly


everyday I engrave those 
musical tunes on sand
In a hope to see them ameliorated by you
But all I see
them vanished away with 
the shrieking waves rush
erasing evidence of my love and patience 
Still I believe to see
one already engraved set of tunes 
before I come the next day
In search of
The Key Of My Heart.
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  1. BikramJuly 10, 2012 at 7:02 PM

    hmmmmm but intodays day and age is it a good thing to hand over the key of your heart to anyone :) jsut a thought

    a beautiful poem simran .. take care

    Bikram's

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:33 AM

      It's not that secure in today's time but you know ...love when happens... it seems boundless of anything!
      I do agree with what you said! thank you so much for sharing your thought. Worth to keep in mind in today's era.

      Glad you felt poetry beautiful :)
      You too take care!

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  2. JeevanJuly 10, 2012 at 10:18 PM

    Beautifully engraved poem, Simran! Hope someone play a beautiful song using your heart strings :)

    Loved the poem and cute pictures!
    Best wishes

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:35 AM

      I hope the same...Wish it comes true ! :)
      Thank you so much !!

      Best wishes to you...
      Take care!

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  3. RachitJuly 11, 2012 at 12:19 AM

    poetic words rhyming my heart & here I go.. :)

    Weakest LInk

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:36 AM

      Happy to have you here Rachit!
      Welcome Back! :)

      Rhyming heart! Wow! Expecting a poetry from your side too...
      Thank you so much...
      Will be back to Weakest Link soon... :)

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  4. IrfanuddinJuly 11, 2012 at 8:33 AM

    so just think twice before moving ahead, thats what Bikram wants to say you perhaps......:))

    As usual beautiful flow of words here by you Simran....

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:37 AM

      I agree!
      Glad to have your appreciating words.
      Thank you so much.

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  5. Ruchi JainJuly 11, 2012 at 11:52 AM

    simple and beauiful..:)

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  6. Mr.MiglaniJuly 11, 2012 at 1:45 PM

    a beautiful narrated poem

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:38 AM

      Welcome to My Friendship, Rahul!

      Happy you liked! Thank you so much :)
      Hope to have you here again...

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  7. Rahul BhatiaJuly 12, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    You seem to have found the key to heart, Simran:) Lovely poem!

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:40 AM

      Hmm...Not yet Rahul ji!
      Thank you so much...having you here is my pleasure! :)

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  8. Gayatri SoniJuly 12, 2012 at 3:41 PM

    hmmmm.....it seems you are deeply in love with someone ;)

    this poem expresses your inherent feelings.

    beautifully quoted!

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:41 AM

      In love...
      Hmm..nopes! I'm in love with myself! ;)
      Thank you so for encouraging me.
      Love to see you here!

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  9. Melissa TandocJuly 12, 2012 at 5:32 PM

    I love what you wrote little one...this is me ;)

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  10. smJuly 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    beautiful poem

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 10:42 AM

      Thank you so much . sm! :)
      happy to have you here...

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  11. CYNOSUREJuly 14, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    Simran...dear this one was WOW(n times)...superb... :)

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  12. Manisha BhatiaJuly 14, 2012 at 10:18 PM

    SPECTACULAR! So much polishing in ur writing...this one ws frm SOUL...MWAAH!

    LOVE U MY CUTE BUNNY!

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 11:53 PM

      Awww... :)
      Happyyyy to read your appreciating words!!
      Yeyyyyyy :)
      Thank you so much!

      Love u too sweets :*

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  13. AishwaryaJuly 14, 2012 at 10:33 PM

    this a lovely rhyme indeed!
    keep going on simran dear :):):)

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    1. SimranJuly 14, 2012 at 11:53 PM

      Thanks ashzzes!! :):)
      Your presence makes me happy!

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  14. Someone is SpecialJuly 15, 2012 at 2:26 PM

    Where did my comment go?? Beautiful take..!

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    1. SimranJuly 16, 2012 at 10:15 PM

      Strange!! :(

      Glad you felt it beautiful!
      Thanks Special One :)

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  15. Ph_July 22, 2012 at 3:45 AM

    Breathtaking!!!!!!!!!!!

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  16. Alok singhalNovember 20, 2016 at 7:06 PM

    Such rhythmic words, lovely poem!

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