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Feelings remain indelible when...

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I want to know your dream , your desire , your destiny 
Tell me where I should take you to?
My dream is to be in your embrace till my last breath,
My desire is to be the reason of your heartbeats,
My destiny is, the path to follow that unite ME & YOU with heart and soul...
Take me wherever you like...
That destine ME & YOU!
Listening her promising words he vow her with a kiss on her forehead to assure her,
''I promise our love will remain evergreen and everlasting, I have faith in you.''


''Feelings remain indelible when admired in the same way from the other side.''

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  1. JeevanJune 1, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    Beautiful Simran! Hope love makes it possible for you... best wishes :)

    Btw. The music was soothing beside!

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    1. SimranJune 1, 2012 at 7:04 PM

      I wish the same :)
      Thank you so much for your precious wishes...

      Music adds meaning in those unsaid words hidden deep within. Music has a magic to make you lost in love with!
      Glad you liked!
      :)

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  2. Rahul BhatiaJune 1, 2012 at 2:47 PM

    Lovely tender thoughts, Simran:)

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    1. SimranJune 1, 2012 at 7:05 PM

      Happy to have you back! :)

      Your appreciating words make me smile!
      Thank you so much.

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  3. Vinay Leo R.June 2, 2012 at 12:38 AM

    Sims is in love? ;) Kaun hai woh lucky ladka :D

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    1. SimranJune 2, 2012 at 7:31 PM

      Pyaar deewana hota hai mastaana hota hai ..Dearo :D

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  4. AishwaryaJune 2, 2012 at 1:28 AM

    beautiful verses Simran dear!!!
    takes me to land of dreams :D:D:D

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  5. Someone is SpecialJune 2, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    Very Beautiful Little One.. Having faith is the best gift.. SmileS..

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    1. SimranJune 2, 2012 at 7:34 PM

      Having faith strengthen the roots of relation...
      Its the best gift indeed!
      Thanks, Special One
      SmileS

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  6. ShobhaJune 2, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    Love is a beautiful feeling !
    Nice thoughts expressed in the poem.

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    1. SimranJune 2, 2012 at 7:35 PM

      Thank you so much Shobha Ji...
      Glad you liked it!

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  7. Melissa TandocJune 2, 2012 at 6:18 PM

    How beautifully written little one. Have you ever felt that way?

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  8. The PoetJune 2, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Dear Simran,
    There really is no greater gift than the gift and promise of faithful love.
    This is so gentle and tender. Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing, my precious one.

    If you are free, come join the fun happening now over at Blog Hop Saturday! Hope you can make it!

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    1. SimranJune 3, 2012 at 12:13 PM

      Welcome Andy Dear,
      Happy you liked and found it beautiful.Oops I checked it late and so the time's up! Sad!
      Will take part in upcoming challenges :)

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  9. psychebubblesJune 2, 2012 at 9:36 PM

    Cute writeup! :))))))

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    1. SimranJune 3, 2012 at 12:16 PM

      Hey Dearie! :)
      Changed your name??
      I checked out your blog and found it's you, Sid!
      Happy to have you here back!

      Glad you felt my write up cute :)
      Thanks!

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  10. some unspoken wordsJune 3, 2012 at 10:52 AM

    its been a long time i visited ur blog. lovely poem and optimistic flow. hows u doing dear :)

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    1. SimranJune 3, 2012 at 12:19 PM

      Hey Annu dear! :)

      Yep! Its been long long ago you visited me!
      It feels great to have sweet readers back! I miss you but what to say, I know everyone is too busy! Hmm...
      Happy to have you dear! Glad you liked it!
      I am all doing great ..hope you too :)

      Keep Visiting me . Your comments means a lot to me!
      Love and Wishes

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  11. Sri ValliJune 3, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    Very beautiful lines Simi....Cute write :)

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    1. SimranJune 3, 2012 at 12:33 PM

      Thanks a lot Valli :)
      Love to see you here ...

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  12. Sri ValliJune 3, 2012 at 12:32 PM

    Very beautiful lines Simi...Cute write :)

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    1. SimranJune 3, 2012 at 8:01 PM

      Thanks a lot Valli :)
      Love to see you here ...

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  13. TTTJune 3, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    very b'fully expressed Simran... loved it

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    1. SimranJune 3, 2012 at 8:03 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, TTT

      Glad you felt it beautiful and loved it! :)
      Thank you so much dear. Happy to have you!

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  14. Jyoti MishraJune 3, 2012 at 4:14 PM

    indeed they r indelible :)
    beautiful n delicate verses, very much as feelings r

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    1. SimranJune 3, 2012 at 8:04 PM

      Welcome Jyoti :)

      Love to listen from you!
      Thanks a lot! :)

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  15. K. Shawn EdgarJune 5, 2012 at 12:47 AM

    Inspired and touching. Good detail.

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    1. SimranJune 7, 2012 at 9:35 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship, K. Shawn Edgar

      Glad it inspired you :)
      thanks

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  16. sHoNaJune 7, 2012 at 6:14 PM

    Loved those bits…. . hAHAHAH!!! coolness! :)loved the style.. enjoyed reading it ...it was quite refreshing to read ....
    lovely woven words and narrative:)...Keep up the good work:)

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    1. SimranJune 7, 2012 at 9:37 PM

      Happy to read your views...
      They makes me sure, I am going great in my writings :)
      Glad you loved the style!
      Thanks a lot, Shona!
      Having you here is so inspiring for me.

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  17. KayJune 11, 2012 at 4:10 AM

    I've certainly enjoyed reading this blissful narrative of love. May you find your destiny, dear Simran.

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    1. SimranJune 12, 2012 at 10:12 AM

      Welcome To My Friendship,Dear Kay

      Happy you enjoyed the read and felt the bliss...
      Thanks a lot for your wishes dear Kay.
      Wish to see you here again.

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  18. Ph_June 25, 2012 at 10:44 PM

    Take me wherever you like...
    That destine ME & YOU

    <3
    <3
    You've captured those feelings dear Simran. This is awesome.

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