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It was never going to be an ordinary day

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It was never going to be an ordinary day 
For the first time we were apart ; far away
Those distances between us ceased my smile and dimmed the flicker in my eyes
Endless were the sobs rolled down with a galore of hidden twinge 
Life seem deserted a day without him
My perky life ; ever chanting was still 
Still as it never used to be !
Reasons were failed to furnish my suppressed feelings
I lost someone , someday
It was never going to be an ordinary day
Enough to change my life and myself
For I was not as I used to be !
Those promises we made to stay together were deplored 
My life was still but not the time or the world
It was getting dark
As usual the night beauty in her black gown accumulating white shining pearls was ready to scatter them as stars ; the night's beauty spark
The darkness of black sky ruminated me
My eyes were staring hard at the most shine flickering star ; the night's beauty spark
I smiled , I smiled for once in that ruminating gloom covering me all around  
The black sky is my heart and that twinkling star is my love!
Those stars are far away but still there is a connection of affection
Strings of love and suppressed feelings were replenished ;
As I realized ,
Though he is far away from my sight but still so close than ever before within my heart.




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  1. BikramMay 9, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    well simran i think no day is a ordinary day .. each day is special we just have to look at it that way ..

    that is a beautiful but sad poem

    Bikram's

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  2. SimranMay 9, 2012 at 5:47 PM

    I agree , everyday is so special whether its outcome is good or bad but still at the end of the day it gives us something ..as a happiness or experience.

    I think there should be contrast in posts ..sometimes happy and sometime sad. Will try to come up with something full of joy next time :)

    Thank you !

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  3. CYNOSUREMay 9, 2012 at 6:57 PM

    Beautifully written Simran...I agree with Bikram that everyday in itself is a special one...
    loved it... :)

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    1. SimranMay 10, 2012 at 9:03 PM

      Thank you so much Sarab!
      happy you loved it :D

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  4. Manisha BhatiaMay 10, 2012 at 9:29 AM

    Honey this is soo beautiful. Mani

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  5. ArtiMay 10, 2012 at 11:36 AM

    Very well written dear Simran :) I especially loved the way you have ended it, through pain and sadness a glimmer of hope and positivity twinkling in the end... how lovely that is :)

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    1. SimranMay 10, 2012 at 9:05 PM

      Thank you so much Arti dear
      Its so nice to read from you :-)
      So happy you liked it~
      Hope always shines :-)

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  6. Deepa DuraisamyMay 10, 2012 at 7:41 PM

    I cant write poetry at all! So I admire people who can! Nicely done! Long distance relationships are so hard and difficult on everyone involved.

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    1. SimranMay 10, 2012 at 9:07 PM

      Welcome Deepa to My Friendship!

      Thank you so much for the admiration. Happy you liked!
      Distances make incompleteness in life...

      Hope to have you here again :-)

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  7. Amruta MarwahMay 11, 2012 at 12:04 AM

    Beautiful poem... I have always the beauty of words that a poem brings out.... the fluidity of your poem is impressive....keep up the good work :)

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  8. SimranMay 11, 2012 at 7:56 PM

    Welcome to MY Friendship , Amruta

    Glad my poetry impressed you. Thank you so much for visiting and leaving your views.I visited yours and it was a great read there :-)

    Hope to have you here again and again :-)

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  9. BKMay 11, 2012 at 10:12 PM

    Sad but beautiful..as shelley said 'our sweetest songs are those that speak of saddest thoughts'. I loved the flow of words and emotions..

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    1. SimranMay 12, 2012 at 9:31 AM

      Welcome to MY FRIENDSHIP, BK

      Sweet lines..
      Glad you loved it :)

      Thank you so much for visiting my blog hope to have you here regular.

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  10. BKMay 11, 2012 at 10:24 PM

    I think my previous comment disappeared... :)

    Commenting again..

    Its so sad and yet so beautiful.. As shelley said 'Our sweetest songs are those that speak of saddest thoughts'

    I loved the flow of words and emotions in the poem..

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    1. SimranMay 12, 2012 at 9:32 AM

      Hmm it wasn't lost anywhere but was pending for moderation :-)

      Thank you so much dear :)

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    2. BKMay 12, 2012 at 9:15 PM

      okkk my bad.. :P

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    3. SimranMay 13, 2012 at 11:27 AM

      Not your bad but so kind of you to re-leave your comment so that I could come to know your views...Thanks for that :)

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  11. Someone is SpecialMay 12, 2012 at 1:56 AM

    Very beautifully written little one.. I loved your new blog theme a lot.. Superb!

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    1. SimranMay 12, 2012 at 9:34 AM

      Yuppiee :-)
      Special One liked the make over and poem too! :D
      Time to celebrate! :D
      Was eagerly waiting to know to know your views.

      Thank you so much !
      Smiles

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  12. HelenMay 17, 2012 at 2:42 PM

    What a journey... your words are mesmerising and your writing beautiful and descriptive.
    Best of luck in the competition.

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    1. SimranMay 18, 2012 at 12:04 PM

      Welcome to My Friendship , Helen

      So happy to read your appreciating words. A boost up for me :)
      Thank you so much for the wishes. Hope to have you again :)

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  13. AishwaryaMay 22, 2012 at 12:03 PM

    oh the poem is lovey simran! :D
    honestly beautiful! :D:D:D:D

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