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Words in silence she wrote with the drops of water to make him read her heart but the shrieking waves splashed over those bubble lived words as the distances between them thrashed over scars of her heart once again!
For How Long?
And she was again lost in her obsessed obscure reverie.
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  1. KajalMarch 3, 2012 at 10:33 PM

    nice ..it's crisp and to the point. loved it.

    Glad to have found you at ndiblogger. your newest follower and a regular visitor now.
    cheers
    kajal

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    1. SimranMarch 4, 2012 at 11:32 AM

      Welcome, Kajal! :)
      So happy you liked my post and to have a sweet follower and reader! :)

      Thank you so much,Kajal!

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  2. CYNOSUREMarch 3, 2012 at 10:45 PM

    too good...loved it...simple and beautiful... :)

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  3. Someone is SpecialMarch 3, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    Little one.. Beautiful.!!!

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  4. fantasy in practicalityMarch 3, 2012 at 11:20 PM

    lovely, too good, words fall short to praise the feelings you expressed so beautifully:)

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    1. SimranMarch 4, 2012 at 11:34 AM

      Feelings never relay on words...they are always powerful! :)

      Thanks Sanchi!!

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  5. photos by janMarch 4, 2012 at 12:50 PM

    Beautiful.

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  6. BikramMarch 4, 2012 at 4:38 PM

    oh..
    love well who knows what love is .. its different for different people

    i felt sad reading

    althought a beautiful poem simran.

    Bikram's

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    1. SimranMarch 4, 2012 at 6:13 PM

      Love has different shades of feelings like our lives.. Each one is different !

      Hmmm.. I'll try for a cheerful poem next time to make you smile! :)
      Glad you liked it..
      Thank you so much! :D

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  7. AnonymousMarch 5, 2012 at 8:46 AM

    How vivid! ;-)

    Nicely done. Nice photo illustration too.

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  8. SimranMarch 5, 2012 at 12:09 PM

    Welcome,Musingbymoonlight! :)
    Thank you so much!

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  9. SimranMarch 5, 2012 at 1:24 PM

    Glad you felt my words...
    Thank you so much,Shona :)

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  10. Ph_March 5, 2012 at 11:41 PM

    Last line <3

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  11. AnonymousMarch 6, 2012 at 8:02 AM

    work of a brilliant mind.
    :)

    Luna

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    1. SimranMarch 8, 2012 at 12:59 PM

      Thank you so much for showering such great words :)

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