This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
Love the imagery of the two haiku. Thank you for sharing.
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ReplyDeleteI never thought of feet being perceptive, but why not? :)
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"perceptive her feet" My favourite line here but I enjoyed both of your images - your Haiku
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ReplyDeleteLovely take on the prompt ~~ Here is my Day 22.
ReplyDeleteVery nice set...specially the second one ~
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@br!nDle
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Awesome one Simi!
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ReplyDeleteOh yes, they are! :)
Thank you Magical Mystical..
@Ellecee
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So happy you liked it :)
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@Mama Zen
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@becca givens
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@Grace
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I like your dp .. :)
@☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬
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Adroit artistic - wonderfully worded!
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*applause* ~ little one..........
ReplyDeletepassionate feet ..preety post
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