Withering blossom
Awaiting for the cool sensational touch of silver dotted threads of heaven
To make them pure and refreshing once again
Such is your love!
Come and quench the thirst of my heart
Season has been changed by the time of spring,
Replenishment of leaves sprouts and blossoms renewed...
Such is your love!
Come and overwhelm my broken heart
Trees are standing still and calm
Waiting for the breeze to hold them
And pass by to let them dance and reflexive -repulsive rejoice
Such is your love!
Come and embrace me tightly in your arms
I need you and your love
This huge world seems to be have failures and full of hurdles
But it runs on hope that even enlighten the dark pathway
Such is your love!
Come and re-fill this hopeless lover's black heart to pink loving heart once again
Oh my love!
I still remember that Conversation we had in silence
Preaching each other’s unsaid words
Those fast heartbeats
Warmth of your touch with caress
Our meeting lips to quench the thirst of united souls
Such is your love!
Come and embrace me tightly in your arms
I need you and your love
Sharing this post with Poetry Picnic Week 16: My Life In Free Verse
i am amazed at your poetry writing skills...you are so young and you write so beautifully.. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful Simran. I hope your love does come and claim your heart soon.
ReplyDeletehttp://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/02/our-journey-someone-said-love-happens.html
Lovely dear.
ReplyDeleteVery lovely poem, Simran :) ♥
ReplyDeleteI forgot to tell, I loved the falling rose petals and heart widget. :) ♥
ReplyDeleteNICE.
ReplyDelete-Portia
Hopeful and blissful emotions,
ReplyDeleteLove is light,
well done,
lovely poem
ReplyDeletenice blog template & rose petals i lovee it .
ReplyDeletea beautiful way to write a poem.. Loved it so much Little One.. I love the rose petals.. so sweet...
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Lovers pining for their hearts to be full again. I enjoyed this. So romantic!
ReplyDeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteSuch sweet sentiments from one so young. The falling petals are a nice touch too.
Well done, Simran dear!
Thanks for sharing & visiting. I always appreciate your comments.
For ref:
Our Candlelight Of Love
A very sweet poem on love and the backdrop of rose petals make this appear caressing the lovers!
ReplyDeleteCome and quench the thirst of my heart <3
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
Oustanding dear....I loved the petal effect too ^_^
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful!
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Rimly,
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Thank you ,Rimly :)
JANU,
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Shreya,
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Glad you liked it!
Thanks for appreciating me and my blog :) ♥
Portia,
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Morning,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ,Morning!
Yeah, Love is so bright :)
sHoNa,
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Someone is Special,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Special One :)
Was waiting eagerly to know your views..Glad you loved it!
The Write Girl,
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the post ..
Thank you so much! :)
Andy,
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I'm honored!
Rahul Bhatia,
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Thank you so much.. :)
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Thank you so much!
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My Creative Star!
Beautifully written ... falling rose petals added to its allure. Thank you for sharing ~~
ReplyDeleteextremely beautiful post....
ReplyDeletewud like to share a story a bit similar to words used in ur write up (unsaid words)
http://csdevendrapagal.blogspot.com/2011/06/blog-post_18.html
Well that was certianly different!
ReplyDeleteLovely, and very mature :)
ReplyDeletelove the "silver dotted threads of heaven"! Thank you for sharing. :)
ReplyDeleteI wish I could express myself fully and show how terrible this need is for somebody..,I wish someone could hear this silent plea and heed to this...
ReplyDeleteI love all the images you choose for your posts. They are so lovely.
I read this and it reminds me of the Song of Songs in the Bible....
I love this :)
your poem is melting in my heart<3
ReplyDeletelovely poem....
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CS Devendra K Sharma "Man without Brain" ,
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Glad you liked it
Will come on yours soon :)
Whitesnake,
ReplyDeleteHappy that you find it unique..
Thanks :)
halfwaybetweenthegutter,
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Hope to have you again :)
Melissa,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Melissa :)
melissa,
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I'm so much happy you are liking my creations..and they are touching your emotions..
Thank you so much for appreciating me..
fantacy in practicality ,
ReplyDeleteWow!
That's a point :)
Thanks
Hema ,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much di :)