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Thank you Thursday Poet Rally  for honoring me with Perfect Poet Award



  Stagnant perspex
Glistening dark
Savoring spark
Muttering musing 
Thought of New Day New Hope
Surrendered mistake
A promise to remake the break
Stardom to ponder with elegance and ahead way

Comments

  1. That was a deep verse Simran.


    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/01/when-i-am-gone.html

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  2. Wow! Very beautiful verse :) Congratulations on the award. Good to see they got my nomination in time :D Yippee!

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  3. Beautiful and Congrats Sim.. your page rank is 2.. Wow..

    Someone is Special

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  4. Excellent choice of words Simran...as usual u rock!!!

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  5. Yepp new day NEW HOPE ...

    and congrats on the award

    Bikram's

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  6. Hello dear one.
    Nice poem.
    Congratulations on the award! May many more awards & much success come your way.

    Thanks also or the lovely birthday wishes. I appreciate them very much.

    Seasons Of Beauty

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  7. Someone is Special,
    Wow! I'm proceeding :)
    Thanks for informing me..
    Glad you liked it ..

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  8. Ph_,
    Happy you liked it my lovely dear <3 :)

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  9. Alpana,
    Thank you so much :)
    You all are my inspiration!
    I'm blessed to have so talented people around !

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  10. Andy Dear ,
    Happy you called me Dear one :)
    Thank you so much for your sweet wishes ..I wish the same for you :)

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  11. Congrats on the award. Have just read this one poem, and I already think you deserve it.
    Am thankful to Leo for sharing your blog link with me. I still find it hard to believe you are so young.

    Janhvi - jojofeelings.wordpress.com

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  12. jojofeelings ,
    Glad you liked my poem :)
    and more happy to know that Leo shared my work ...Thanks Leo :)

    This little blogger hopes to have you alongside in this journey :D
    Thank you so much Janhvi..

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  13. Congratulations.
    Nice verse.

    I liked your blog,Simran.

    May God bless you.

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  14. Rakesh Kumar,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Thank you so much for appreciating and blessing me :)

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  15. Thanks Simran for your kind
    response on my comment,

    If you like Hindi Blogs,please,
    visit mine also.You are most
    welcome.

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  16. Rakesh Kumar,
    Will visit you soon :)

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  17. Punam,
    Glad you loved it!
    Thank you so much,Punam :)

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  18. Manju,
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thank you so much! :)

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~Simran

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