by - Sunday, October 02, 2011

Glittering shingles,
I walked on,
Leaving my footprints as residue of my presence,
Soothing waves brushing my hairs,
I can feel the  pleasure,
The treasure of moments I lived ,
Sitting at shore,
Closing eyes,
Melody enchanting in my heart,
I attained peace,
But that Silent Sunset is asking me ,
''Are You Setting Down As Me?''
Have you done with the reason of your life?
I opened my eyes,
Searching  the meaning of my presence and I couldn't find the one!
As each moment was passing ..It was getting darker and darker,
And all the footprints ,
The meaning ruined in shrieking splashes of water waves,
I realized that the whole life I lived in dilemma of satisfaction 
In Assembling my desire I forgot the target of my life,
I'm all alone left in this deep ocean of emptiness and delusion 
And I've no answer to reply the Almighty!

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  1. I am in a daze,extremely well written..u are too good.I love it Simran.

  2. Wonderful and following you now.

  3. @Alpana,
    As I try to make you every time ;)
    Thank you so much..

  4. @JANU,
    Welcome to my blog:)
    I'm so happy you liked my post ..
    Thank you for following :)
    Will come on yours soon :)

  5. Its beautoiful simran ...

    loved reading it ...


  6. wow.. amazing Super simmi..
    loved ending the most- wat I call an ultimate realization..
    sweet-sweet one.. just like u..
    :) :) <3 <3

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  8. Sim such a deep insight in young age is exemplary!

    Good goin gal....jhakkas!

  9.,don't get so worked up by the sunset!It holds the promise of a rosey dawn.

  10. @Bikramjit,
    Thank you dear for appreciating me each time ..
    Happy you liked it :)

    Would love to see here again and again;)

  11. @Monu,
    Thank you so much dearo :)
    Self realization is the biggest thing!
    Keep Coming :)

  12. @Fher Ymas,
    I'm glad that you liked my post and featured it on your sweet blog :)

    Thank you so much..I'm honored !
    Hope to listen from you again ..

  13. @Mani,
    Thank you so much for praising me :)

  14. Good work Simy!!
    I really loved this poem :)
    I can relate to it a lot

  15. Hello.
    My first time visiting from Blogger by Passion group.

    Very thought-provoking & well expressed. I especially liked the imagery of the opening lines & the ending.

    Nicely done!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Unchain My Heart

  16. beautiful expression!
    some times we have no query
    some times we have no answer...
    really nice to read !
    keep writing & smiling always!
    & ur blog is glittering as u are :)

  17. @Portia,
    Thanks for such enlightening words :)

  18. @Valli,
    I'm happy that my words can relate you somewhere as it relates to me as well!
    Thank you

  19. @Andy,
    Welcome to my blog,
    Happy that you liked the post :)
    Hope to see you again ..

  20. @Sowmya,
    Hey, thank you so much for such a sweet comment! :)
    Hope to see you again..

  21. beautiful simmy...keep writing..make ur poem book yaar

  22. Adorable.
    Following u,
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  24. @Sneha,
    Planning for the same :)

  25. @Mahi,
    Thank you for following :)
    Will come to you soon!

  26. @Indilink,
    Wow! that's a great pleasure :)
    thank you

  27. Satisfaction is far from being a dilemma. Your reason is to rejoice. Keep writing. In doing so, you leave "your mark."
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    Welcome to my blog..
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    Hey, Thanks :)
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