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Glittering shingles,
I walked on,
Leaving my footprints as residue of my presence,
Soothing waves brushing my hairs,
I can feel the  pleasure,
The treasure of moments I lived ,
Sitting at shore,
Closing eyes,
Melody enchanting in my heart,
I attained peace,
But that Silent Sunset is asking me ,
''Are You Setting Down As Me?''
Have you done with the reason of your life?
I opened my eyes,
Searching  the meaning of my presence and I couldn't find the one!
As each moment was passing ..It was getting darker and darker,
And all the footprints ,
The meaning ruined in shrieking splashes of water waves,
I realized that the whole life I lived in dilemma of satisfaction 
In Assembling my desire I forgot the target of my life,
I'm all alone left in this deep ocean of emptiness and delusion 
And I've no answer to reply the Almighty!

Linking this post with Thursday Poets’ Rally Week 55
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  1. Alpana JaiswalOctober 2, 2011 at 10:57 PM

    I am in a daze,extremely well written..u are too good.I love it Simran.

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  2. JANUOctober 2, 2011 at 11:03 PM

    Wonderful and exquisite...am following you now.

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  3. SimranOctober 2, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    @Alpana,
    As I try to make you every time ;)
    Thank you so much..

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  4. SimranOctober 2, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    @JANU,
    Welcome to my blog:)
    I'm so happy you liked my post ..
    Thank you for following :)
    Will come on yours soon :)

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  5. BikramOctober 2, 2011 at 11:21 PM

    Its beautoiful simran ...

    loved reading it ...


    Bikram's

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  6. Monu AwallaOctober 3, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    wow.. amazing Super simmi..
    loved ending the most- wat I call an ultimate realization..
    sweet-sweet one.. just like u..
    :) :) <3 <3

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  7. FhermissionOctober 3, 2011 at 7:33 AM

    Like this post Tagged ArtLover Group made it a feature in Random Pick 005
    Visit the page to see...
    http://artlovergroup.blogspot.com/2011/10/random-pick-005.html

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  8. Manisha BhatiaOctober 3, 2011 at 10:01 AM

    Sim such a deep insight in young age is exemplary!

    Good goin gal....jhakkas!

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  9. UnknownOctober 3, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Oh.baby,don't get so worked up by the sunset!It holds the promise of a rosey dawn.
    -PORTIA

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  10. SimranOctober 3, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    @Bikramjit,
    Thank you dear for appreciating me each time ..
    Happy you liked it :)

    Would love to see here again and again;)

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  11. SimranOctober 3, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    @Monu,
    Thank you so much dearo :)
    Self realization is the biggest thing!
    Keep Coming :)

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  12. SimranOctober 3, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    @Fher Ymas,
    I'm glad that you liked my post and featured it on your sweet blog :)

    Thank you so much..I'm honored !
    Hope to listen from you again ..

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  13. SimranOctober 3, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    @Mani,
    Thank you so much for praising me :)

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  14. Sri ValliOctober 3, 2011 at 6:09 PM

    Good work Simy!!
    I really loved this poem :)
    I can relate to it a lot

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  15. The PoetOctober 3, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    Hello.
    My first time visiting from Blogger by Passion group.

    Very thought-provoking & well expressed. I especially liked the imagery of the opening lines & the ending.

    Nicely done!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Unchain My Heart

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  16. smiling soulOctober 4, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    beautiful expression!
    some times we have no query
    some times we have no answer...
    really nice to read !
    keep writing & smiling always!
    & ur blog is glittering as u are :)

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  17. SimranOctober 5, 2011 at 10:19 PM

    @Portia,
    Thanks for such enlightening words :)

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  18. SimranOctober 5, 2011 at 10:21 PM

    @Valli,
    I'm happy that my words can relate you somewhere as it relates to me as well!
    Thank you

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  19. SimranOctober 5, 2011 at 10:21 PM

    @Andy,
    Welcome to my blog,
    Happy that you liked the post :)
    Hope to see you again ..

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  20. SimranOctober 5, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    @Sowmya,
    Hey, thank you so much for such a sweet comment! :)
    Hope to see you again..

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  21. SnehaOctober 7, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    beautiful simmy...keep writing..make ur poem book yaar

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  22. Subtle Yet OutlandishOctober 7, 2011 at 11:12 PM

    I liked your writing.. :)

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  23. UnknownOctober 8, 2011 at 1:11 PM

    Adorable.
    Following u,
    U can so @ www.mahikhokhar.blogspot.com

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  24. SimranOctober 23, 2011 at 12:51 AM

    @Sneha,
    Planning for the same :)

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  25. SimranOctober 23, 2011 at 12:52 AM

    @Mahi,
    Thank you for following :)
    Will come to you soon!

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  26. SimranOctober 23, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    @Indilink,
    Wow! that's a great pleasure :)
    thank you

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  27. KayNovember 10, 2011 at 5:08 AM

    Satisfaction is far from being a dilemma. Your reason is to rejoice. Keep writing. In doing so, you leave "your mark."
    Kay Salady, Author
    Arizona, USA

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  28. The Orange TreeNovember 11, 2011 at 2:05 AM

    lovely background music,
    Happy Rally.

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  29. SimranNovember 11, 2011 at 8:01 PM

    Kay,
    Welcome to my blog..
    Agree with you dear. Glad you liked my work...Hope to have again

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  30. SimranNovember 11, 2011 at 8:02 PM

    The Orange Tree,
    Hey, Thanks :)
    Happy Rally ..

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