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Poignant eternity
I'm falling 
In lap of ground 
To meet lavish green growth
With soft cool dew 
To withdraw oneself 
Into this vast eternity
Once again.

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  1. Sri ValliOctober 24, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    Good one Simy...nice poem :)

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  2. SimranOctober 24, 2011 at 9:49 PM

    ☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ ,
    Thank you ,Valli :)

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  3. UnknownOctober 24, 2011 at 9:52 PM

    Adorable poem. I'd have like to kinda short sweet Poem.

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  4. SimranOctober 24, 2011 at 9:54 PM

    Mahi Khokhar,
    Glad you liked this one :)
    Thank you ..

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  5. GeetOctober 24, 2011 at 10:09 PM

    wow lines liked it :)sim sim

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  6. SimranOctober 24, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    Geet,
    Thanks sweet geets:)

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  7. Someone is SpecialOctober 25, 2011 at 12:28 AM

    Good one sim...

    Someone is Special

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  8. Someone is SpecialOctober 25, 2011 at 12:28 AM

    and convey my regards to Grand ma..

    Someone is Special

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  9. VaisakhiOctober 25, 2011 at 12:30 AM

    i simply loved the imagry....beautiful....n lovely pic..:)

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  10. The PoetOctober 25, 2011 at 3:50 AM

    Hello.
    Lovely expressions & nice imagery.

    Thanks for sharing.
    I appreciate your visits & comments too.

    Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes

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  11. Hema NimbekarOctober 25, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    such a deep thought....Loved it..short but sweet one....

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  12. SimranOctober 25, 2011 at 6:40 PM

    Someone Is Special,

    Sure I'll convey your regards to mu grand ma,
    Thank you so much :)

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  13. SimranOctober 25, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    Vaisakhi,
    I'm so happy you liked it!
    thank you dear :)

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  14. SimranOctober 25, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    Andy dear,
    Thank you so much :)

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  15. SimranOctober 25, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    Hema di,
    I'm so happy ...
    Thank you :)

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  16. IsabelJanuary 12, 2012 at 11:26 PM

    love the last few lines. wonderful.

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  17. SnowflakesJanuary 13, 2012 at 1:40 AM

    love the imagery of this,

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  18. AnonymousJanuary 13, 2012 at 12:04 PM

    Nice expressions.
    Love it.
    Best wishes.

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  19. Ruchi JainJanuary 14, 2012 at 11:50 AM

    To withdraw one self in vast eternity, very touching line.

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  20. Anshul GautamJanuary 15, 2012 at 12:38 AM

    Lovely poetry...Short and nice.. :)

    ANSHUL
    http://anshul-gautam.blogspot.com/2012/01/butterfly.html

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  21. The PoetJanuary 15, 2012 at 8:46 AM

    Hello Simran dear.
    I'm revisiting this one.
    The ending of this poem is very deep. You have poetic expression way beyond your young words.
    Awesome imagery!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Harp Of My Soul

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  22. ChèvrefeuilleJanuary 16, 2012 at 8:35 AM

    Wonderfully crafted poem, loved reading it.

    Namaste

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  23. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    You painted a beautiful picture in my mind, as well as left me wondering. The ending of this poem is brilliant, and it leaves me wanting to know more. Great work!

    Here's mine for the rally: Ripples and the Anchor

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