Poignant eternity
I'm falling
In lap of ground
To meet lavish green growth
With soft cool dew
To withdraw oneself
Into this vast eternity
Once again.
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
Good one Simy...nice poem :)
ReplyDelete☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ ,
ReplyDeleteThank you ,Valli :)
Adorable poem. I'd have like to kinda short sweet Poem.
ReplyDeleteMahi Khokhar,
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked this one :)
Thank you ..
wow lines liked it :)sim sim
ReplyDeleteGeet,
ReplyDeleteThanks sweet geets:)
Good one sim...
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and convey my regards to Grand ma..
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i simply loved the imagry....beautiful....n lovely pic..:)
ReplyDeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteLovely expressions & nice imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
I appreciate your visits & comments too.
Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes
such a deep thought....Loved it..short but sweet one....
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ReplyDeleteSure I'll convey your regards to mu grand ma,
Thank you so much :)
Vaisakhi,
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy you liked it!
thank you dear :)
Andy dear,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
Hema di,
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy ...
Thank you :)
love the last few lines. wonderful.
ReplyDeletelove the imagery of this,
ReplyDeleteNice expressions.
ReplyDeleteLove it.
Best wishes.
To withdraw one self in vast eternity, very touching line.
ReplyDeleteLovely poetry...Short and nice.. :)
ReplyDeleteANSHUL
http://anshul-gautam.blogspot.com/2012/01/butterfly.html
Hello Simran dear.
ReplyDeleteI'm revisiting this one.
The ending of this poem is very deep. You have poetic expression way beyond your young words.
Awesome imagery!
Thanks for sharing.
Harp Of My Soul
Wonderfully crafted poem, loved reading it.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
You painted a beautiful picture in my mind, as well as left me wondering. The ending of this poem is brilliant, and it leaves me wanting to know more. Great work!
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