The beauty of hairs Attracts and capture the attention of every stare, But it is hard to nourish and to give proper care Busy schedule and outings makes them dull and shiny rare, My beauty is evading away... I'm aware! Nothing is with me that can sooth me or do fair justice with my thin hairs Then I recapitulated the famous saying: ''Love is a two way street: Love your hair and it loves you back'' Searching all around I found the trustworthy Dove, I pampered my hairs and said, don’t worry now it's Dove for you to love, And the day I started this beautiful journey of Dove's Love, I found a brand new day waiting for me to see my true colors of pulchritude Embraced me within its charm and defined me with a unique personality! Restoring the softness It nourished my dry hairs, Now my hairs fall very rare, They can feel the fresh air, Dove lengthen my hairs With eternal shine and strength Though I don't have much time for my hairs But having Dove alo
Amazing piece of work Simran...I have tears in my eyes reading it.
ReplyDeleteNice!! You have a beautiful blog. Happy blogging :)
ReplyDeletehi simmi.dadi ko padhkar accha laga.sach hai kaha kaha chale jate kavi
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Nice to know that it relates something to you..
@JANU,
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@Shreya,
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Thank you so much!
Wishing you the same..
Hope to see you again.
@Kanu,
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Glad you liked it! :)
Thank you so much..
Keep stopping by..
'Thirst of the heart'.. Wow! Grandma.. I love your poem madly.. Great..
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बहुत सुंदर भावपूर्ण रचना आभार एक सुझाव चाहें तो मानें या ना माने कुछ गलतियों को सुधार लीजिये जैसे बुझाते करुणा......
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ReplyDeleteWhen I told this to my granny..she smiled and conveyed her blessings to you :)
Thank you Special one!
@Sunil Kumar
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I'll try my best!
Thank you :)
Gahraiyo se le aate hai jyoti... Kitni sundar rachna hai... shabd nahi bayan karne ke liye...sach... Dadiji ko mera adar bhara naman... :):)
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@Arti,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for such sweet appreciating words :)
Happy Diwali to you too ..
Lot's of love
amazing one....
ReplyDeleteदादी जी को मेरी तरफ से इस रचना के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई...
सच में कहाँ कहाँ ये चले जाते है कवि....
सच कहूँ तो बैठे-बैठे तीनो दुनिया की सैर करते है कवि..
HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY..
Hema di,
ReplyDeleteWow! Thanks for the line from your side :)
Thank you so much!
Happy diwali to you too and your family :)
Keep Smiling!