I Want To Be ''FREE''

by - Monday, August 15, 2011

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 23; the twenty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for this month is FREE.

My Dreams are holding me somewhere strong,
startled of grasping goal ...
But Hold On!!!
Confinement is shrouding around me,
Oh! I'm In an Enigma of divergence,
Let me come out from this bounded corral of remorse emotions,
Where restriction is self decision is prone,
I want to be Free of this agony prone path,
I want to fly high like a Free Bird,
With colours of joy and rejoice ,
Assembling peace and satisfaction..
False emotions depleted my dreams,
No more I want to dwell myself in this dark..
I want to be ''FREE'' !!
The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. Happy Independence Day!

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  1. Beautiful Simmy..this is the first poem I am reading from ur blog..I loved it!

  2. Beautiful Poem Simran.. Be free forever...Never sit in dark... Fly like a bird..

    Someone is Special

  3. BEAUTIFUL....
    My best wishes for the contest.

  4. beautiful sim....freedom is somethin we have still dont get we dont get....sad....

  5. Nice poem :)

    All the best for the Contest

    Here's my entry
    Them Slaves


  6. let all the brightness come ur way...nice poem.

    keep smiling always :)

  7. oh, we all crave for that...beautifully penned down...

  8. The urge for freedom is well expressed!

  9. beautifully penned down...loved it.....thanks for sharing dear....:):)

    Happy Independence Day....

  10. simrannnn u seem to b quite a pro at writin poems.
    really amazes me hw u cn put it all together n a diffrnt one each time! :-)

  11. And free shall you be.
    Nice read Simran.

    All the while I was reading this, I had a question to ask.

    Why did you take down the last post on Rakhi? It was good, but when I came to comment, it had been taken off.

    Blasphemous Aesthete

  12. Nice poem. Words well used to express emotions. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton. You can find my entry here In search of freedom

  13. A very well written poem... loved it!

    ATB for BAT

    Do check out my entry at Free? To do what exactly?

    Wandering Thoughts

  14. Nice poem. All the best for the BAT.

  15. Hmm free...sounds gr8 when we read that one single word....everyone needs it...
    All the best dearo :)

  16. Yeah. I want to be free too. i want to fly. I want a peaceful life. :)
    I love the poem. There's something I felt the moment I read this. I can't explain.

    Nice poem. :)

  17. great poetry, simran :)

    i see the want to fly free, the courage to break out of the shackles of mediocrity and the dream of freedom.

    wish you all the best!!

    you can read my entry for BAT-23 here---

    cheers!! :)

  18. @Sneha,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    I'm glad you liked it!
    Thank you so much dear..
    Hope to listen from you again:)

  19. Lovely poem-especially like the line "false emotions depleted my dreams".
    ATB for BATOM

  20. @Someone is Special,
    Here you are special :)
    Thank you so much for encouraging me..

  21. @Irfan,
    Thanks a lot for the wishes :))

  22. @Some unspoken words,
    Awww :)..Thank you so much ..

  23. @Vaisakhi,
    That's true!
    Thanks for stopping by :)

  24. @Sowmya,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Hey, thanks for the cute wishes ..
    Hope to see you again..

  25. @Aativas,
    Thank you dear :)..
    Will come to your blog soon..

  26. @Hema di,
    Thank you (^_^)
    Best of luck to you too :)

  27. @Sadiya Merchant,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Awwww :) so sweet, Thank you so much for appreciating me ..I'm so happy!
    Hope to see you again..

  28. @ Blasphemous Aesthete,
    Thank you so much dear. Glad that you liked it :)

    Actually on that day when you came to read the Rakhi post on my blog, I posted that to check that how it will look and according to that I was supposed to make changes .As I and hema made that a combined post so both of us posts must looks similar. And on the day of Rakhi we posted that..Sorry for the inconvenience ..

  29. @The Fool,
    Welcome to my blog,
    Thank you so much :)

  30. @Aashish Sood,
    Thank you so much!

  31. @FAYE,
    I'm happy that my poem touched you and relates you somewhere..
    Thank you :)

  32. @Bikramjit,
    Gooo! (^_^)
    Thank you :)

  33. @Pri
    Thank you so much dear :)

  34. @Brijender Singh
    Thank you so much :)
    Hope to see you again..

  35. BEAUTIFUL... :)..loved one line a lot "false emotions depleted my dreams"
    my entry..FREE ..good luck 4 BAT

  36. Short, beautiful and apt, especially the choice of words. Excellent read.

  37. Freeeeeedom the need of the hour...from all anxieties

  38. Amazing poem, Simran......my tiresome words are besotted by the beauties of words in your poem !!

  39. Beautiful lines,,,justifies the theme too.. good luck

  40. The poem seemed sweet to begin with, spoke of hardships and reflections and finally described the conquest.

    And you've highlighted the things you wanted to emphasize on, speaking for yourself, but I feel if I read it a few more times, for me, other things might stand out and I think that's excellent because it truly fits and flexes in the readers mind.

    I think it's one of the best entries I've across in this BAT.


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