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I Want To Be ''FREE''

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This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 23; the twenty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for this month is FREE.



My Dreams are holding me somewhere strong,
startled of grasping goal ...
But Hold On!!!
Confinement is shrouding around me,
Oh! I'm In an Enigma of divergence,
Let me come out from this bounded corral of remorse emotions,
Where restriction is self decision is prone,
I want to be Free of this agony prone path,
I want to fly high like a Free Bird,
With colours of joy and rejoice ,
Assembling peace and satisfaction..
False emotions depleted my dreams,
No more I want to dwell myself in this dark..
I want to be ''FREE'' !!
The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. Happy Independence Day!
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  1. SnehaAugust 15, 2011 at 12:25 AM

    Beautiful Simmy..this is the first poem I am reading from ur blog..I loved it!

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  2. Someone is SpecialAugust 15, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    Beautiful Poem Simran.. Be free forever...Never sit in dark... Fly like a bird..

    Someone is Special

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  3. IrfanuddinAugust 15, 2011 at 12:50 AM

    BEAUTIFUL....
    My best wishes for the contest.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 15, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    loved it simran. written beautifully

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  5. VaisakhiAugust 15, 2011 at 11:17 AM

    beautiful sim....freedom is somethin we have still dont get we dont get....sad....

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  6. CRDAugust 15, 2011 at 12:06 PM

    Nice poem :)

    All the best for the Contest

    Here's my entry
    Them Slaves

    Cheers
    CRD

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  7. smiling soulAugust 15, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    let all the brightness come ur way...nice poem.

    keep smiling always :)

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  8. Subhrashis AdhikariAugust 15, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    oh, we all crave for that...beautifully penned down...

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  9. aativasAugust 15, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    The urge for freedom is well expressed!

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  10. Hema NimbekarAugust 15, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    beautifully penned down...loved it.....thanks for sharing dear....:):)

    Happy Independence Day....

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  11. Sadiya MerchantAugust 15, 2011 at 5:50 PM

    simrannnn u seem to b quite a pro at writin poems.
    really amazes me hw u cn put it all together n a diffrnt one each time! :-)

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  12. Blasphemous AestheteAugust 15, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    And free shall you be.
    Nice read Simran.

    All the while I was reading this, I had a question to ask.

    Why did you take down the last post on Rakhi? It was good, but when I came to comment, it had been taken off.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  13. T F CarthickAugust 15, 2011 at 9:56 PM

    Nice poem. Words well used to express emotions. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton. You can find my entry here In search of freedom

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  14. Aashish SoodAugust 16, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    A very well written poem... loved it!

    ATB for BAT

    Do check out my entry at Free? To do what exactly?

    Regards
    Wandering Thoughts

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  15. D2August 16, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    Nice poem. All the best for the BAT.
    :)

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  16. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺August 16, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    Hmm free...sounds gr8 when we read that one single word....everyone needs it...
    All the best dearo :)

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  17. UnknownAugust 16, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Yeah. I want to be free too. i want to fly. I want a peaceful life. :)
    I love the poem. There's something I felt the moment I read this. I can't explain.

    Nice poem. :)

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  18. BikramAugust 16, 2011 at 9:10 PM

    I would say GO FOR IT :)


    Bikram's

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  19. PriAugust 16, 2011 at 9:49 PM

    great poetry, simran :)

    i see the want to fly free, the courage to break out of the shackles of mediocrity and the dream of freedom.

    wish you all the best!!

    you can read my entry for BAT-23 here---
    FREE

    cheers!! :)

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  20. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:11 PM

    @Sneha,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    I'm glad you liked it!
    Thank you so much dear..
    Hope to listen from you again:)

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  21. Brijender SinghAugust 17, 2011 at 9:11 PM

    Lovely poem-especially like the line "false emotions depleted my dreams".
    ATB for BATOM

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  22. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    @Someone is Special,
    Here you are special :)
    Thank you so much for encouraging me..

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  23. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:13 PM

    @Irfan,
    Thanks a lot for the wishes :))

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  24. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:14 PM

    @Some unspoken words,
    Awww :)..Thank you so much ..

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  25. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:14 PM

    @Vaisakhi,
    That's true!
    Thanks for stopping by :)

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  26. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    @C R D
    Thank you so much :)

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  27. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    @Sowmya,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Hey, thanks for the cute wishes ..
    Hope to see you again..

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  28. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    @SUB,
    Thank you :)

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  29. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    @Aativas,
    Thank you dear :)..
    Will come to your blog soon..

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  30. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    @Hema di,
    Thank you (^_^)
    Best of luck to you too :)

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  31. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    @Sadiya Merchant,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Awwww :) so sweet, Thank you so much for appreciating me ..I'm so happy!
    Hope to see you again..

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  32. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    @ Blasphemous Aesthete,
    Thank you so much dear. Glad that you liked it :)

    Actually on that day when you came to read the Rakhi post on my blog, I posted that to check that how it will look and according to that I was supposed to make changes .As I and hema made that a combined post so both of us posts must looks similar. And on the day of Rakhi we posted that..Sorry for the inconvenience ..

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  33. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:24 PM

    @The Fool,
    Welcome to my blog,
    Thank you so much :)

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  34. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:24 PM

    @Aashish Sood,
    Thank you so much!

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  35. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:25 PM

    @D2
    THANK YOU ..

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  36. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:25 PM

    @Valli,
    Thanks dearo dear :)

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  37. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    @FAYE,
    I'm happy that my poem touched you and relates you somewhere..
    Thank you :)

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  38. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    @Bikramjit,
    Gooo! (^_^)
    Thank you :)

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  39. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    @Pri
    Thank you so much dear :)

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  40. SimranAugust 17, 2011 at 9:28 PM

    @Brijender Singh
    Thank you so much :)
    Hope to see you again..

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  41. the criticsAugust 17, 2011 at 9:35 PM

    break free the obstacles for the sake of freedom.....

    here is mine

    The search for eternal freedom – A Dragonfly’s curse

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  42. nidhiAugust 19, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    BEAUTIFUL... :)..loved one line a lot "false emotions depleted my dreams"
    my entry..FREE ..good luck 4 BAT
    NIDHI

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  43. Cherry BlossomAugust 20, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    Short, beautiful and apt, especially the choice of words. Excellent read.

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  44. KetanAugust 20, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    Freeeeeedom the need of the hour...from all anxieties

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  45. AnonymousAugust 21, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    Amazing poem, Simran......my tiresome words are besotted by the beauties of words in your poem !!

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  46. The Solitary WriterAugust 21, 2011 at 9:36 PM

    Beautiful lines,,,justifies the theme too.. good luck

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  47. Richi BaidwanAugust 26, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    The poem seemed sweet to begin with, spoke of hardships and reflections and finally described the conquest.

    And you've highlighted the things you wanted to emphasize on, speaking for yourself, but I feel if I read it a few more times, for me, other things might stand out and I think that's excellent because it truly fits and flexes in the readers mind.


    I think it's one of the best entries I've across in this BAT.

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