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IN THIS BEAUTIFUL RAIN

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In this beautiful rain my heart wants to forget it's pain and to let enter the shimmering pearls into my vein,
Closing my eyes with an open heart and open arms I'm welcoming this beautiful rain to grasp it tightly within...
In an optimism that it will ameliorate my sored heart and shattered dreams;
Oh rain , I wish you come again and again; You pleases to my soul and makes me realize my fowl, 
Though the drizzle makes vociferous sound but it assures me that you are coming to the ground!
The hue of rainbow makes me feel the delight ; enlighten my hopes and the way of destiny's bright.
In this beautiful rain my heart wants to forget it's pain and to let enter the shimmering pearls into my vein.
Wet soil's fragrance enhancing my sensation more eternally ; I want to dance in this graceful rain and won't break this amicable chain,
You are the one who heal up my pain;
You are the one who pleases to my vein,
Come rain again and again and heal up my broken heart and strain.
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  1. Harshal PatelJune 13, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    Nice one.....You writing force me to recall my collage days.....When in rain we friends wonder here and ther on bike and shouting on road and then Hot hot tea in rain what amazing days at the time.....

    Wonderful post.....

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  2. ArtiJune 13, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    Rains indeed are one of the most beautiful gifts we have from God... And just like the rains, your poem is so refreshing and delightful too :) wonderful Simran :)

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  3. Monu AwallaJune 13, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    Simmi.. Yes! you are very right.. rains freshens us in & out.. Lovely words dear..
    Altering the song which u like from the Movie- "Swades"
    'Saavanya Saavanya..mein toh hui baanvariya..Baarish ne mann moh liya.. Saavanya ho..:):)

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  4. Geeta SinghJune 13, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    I liked your poem , you have expressed your feeling through this poem ..and wat a rhyming ..:) lovely !! wow!!

    listen and watch it , I am sending u utube link...lovely rain song ^_^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lW-1Ytwn4a4

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  5. IrfanuddinJune 13, 2011 at 1:09 PM

    Beautiful poetic expression....

    and who doesnt love rains??
    be it of any age group or of any section of society...and so do i...:))

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  6. UnknownJune 13, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    Awesome.. :)


    Touched my heart although i didnt read it.. :P

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  7. VaisakhiJune 13, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    the feel of gettin soaked in rain...feelin the bliss of the cold drops lashin ur skin n wind caressin...ooo feels so fresh n amazin...lovely write...:)

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  8. BikramJune 13, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    hmm AMEN to that and may that happen soon .. broken hearts get mended soon and the ones who broke them well may they .....

    ah well god bless them tooo

    Bikram's

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  9. Mohini PuranikJune 13, 2011 at 5:17 PM

    It's so beautiful........really when the rain starts.....all of us have same feelings......."Oh rain , I wish you come again and again; You pleases to my soul and makes me realize my fowl"

    Loved it!

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  10. JIMJune 13, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    I look forward to your blog like I look forward to a summer rain. Really wonderfully written!!!


    http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/06/from-revere-beach-to-florida-keys.html

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  11. Blasphemous AestheteJune 13, 2011 at 11:41 PM

    Rains bring back pleasant memories and yes, the sound of the rain hitting the ground reassures that reality is somewhere close.

    Nice read Simran :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  12. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJune 14, 2011 at 12:01 AM

    mind blowing.
    love the rain image,
    keep writing.

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  13. AnonymousJune 14, 2011 at 1:41 AM

    Beautiful image and wonderful poem there's a sense of rebirth and renewal in your words that's simply divine

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  14. FatimaJune 14, 2011 at 3:10 PM

    Rains indeed soothe the pain...wonderful read :)

    Take Care

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  15. RimlyJune 15, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    Love you poem and what better way than to have the rains cleanse all the pain and sadness. Beautiful

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  16. Someone is SpecialJune 15, 2011 at 11:22 PM

    Touched my heart Simran..

    Someone is Special

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  17. sulekkhaJune 16, 2011 at 7:10 AM

    Rain does wash away all the pain and sadness from our hearts, and it fills us with hope and love again. Lovely poem Simran...

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  18. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    Thank you so much all for your wonderful comments...made me smile:)..Enjoy the rain :D

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  19. GvSparx - Inspiring LivesAugust 3, 2011 at 10:12 PM

    In this beautiful rain my heart wants to forget it's pain and to let enter the shimmering pearls into my vein.

    I really loved the poem :) Excellent work! I really liked the lines I mentioned...

    Short poem and a long comment thread... oh gosh! :D
    Well that's the mark of a quality writer :) Great job! Cheers :)

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  20. SimranAugust 13, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    GvSparx - Inspiring Lives,
    Thank you so much dear :)

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  21. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 17, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    I love the rain especially when it is a hot summerday that ends in a thunderstorm. I love to dance in the rain and stamp in the pools. A wonderfull poem. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  22. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonNovember 17, 2011 at 8:20 AM

    very moving.

    :)

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  23. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryDecember 8, 2011 at 7:11 AM

    perfectly amazing story.

    you rock.

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  24. Marbles in My PocketDecember 8, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    A wonderful tribute to rain! Nicely done!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/08/hope/

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  25. AnonymousDecember 9, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    Just like the rain u started strong and then weak and ended with sweetness.... Pain and happiness both felt in the rain.
    cheers
    http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com

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  26. Susie ClevengerDecember 9, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    A touching, sweet homage to rain

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  27. The Noiseless CuckooclockDecember 9, 2011 at 11:23 PM

    Thanks for sharing.
    what a profound story in poetic form.
    :)

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