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Green leaves getting marcscent;
Turning to tenebrous,
Black shed of clouds over moon and stars covering around all around...
A shadow rectifying its darkness,
Mixture of dark in light gleaming texture drab off its shine;
Closure of bulb quite for the light or resigns,
Close eyes can feel the dark; the emptiness inside!!
Eclipse covering the sun turns off its bright light.

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  1. IrfanuddinJune 16, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    so spontaneous Simran...Good.

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  2. AlcinaJune 16, 2011 at 9:50 AM

    A very clever one..and darkness seems to be seen by the right eyes..
    well personified simo dear..
    and i see vocabulary enhancement ;)

    Keep going girl!

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  3. fantasy in practicalityJune 16, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    close your eyes till the eclipse is over have patience...........now open your eyes, you can again see the green leaves and bright light.

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  4. sulekkhaJune 16, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    Sad sad poem by a happy girl...hope all is well my dear. tc

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  5. Geeta SinghJune 16, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    read it twice ...really wow rhyming :)

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  6. sHoNaJune 16, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    many kisses to u..♥..
    lyk blog..

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  7. Eon HeathJune 16, 2011 at 6:16 PM

    Hey, Hi

    back after a long time..
    :)

    i liked the thought that you put behind these verse..
    beautiful gal..
    :)


    Regards,
    Eon Heath...

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  8. डा0 हेमंत कुमार ♠ Dr Hemant KumarJune 16, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    Nice..and impressive...

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  9. Blasphemous AestheteJune 16, 2011 at 9:41 PM

    So much for a lunar eclipse. :D

    Dark, appealing :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  10. Alpana JaiswalJune 16, 2011 at 10:37 PM

    Beautiful..When I try to relate what you write with your age,it doesn't happen..its always a pleasure to be here...

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  11. Melissa TandocJune 17, 2011 at 4:04 AM

    Hi little one...I'm allowing myself to stay in the dark, only for a while... The One who has led me there, will take me out of there... It could be painful...Geez, it is painful. It's scary, yes... I have come to terms with my need to be always with somebody.... for constant craving for attention. God has taken that spotlight on me and allowed me to look at myself... to know whose hands will be there to guide me back to light... Darkness is "holy"... Thanks for your poem... love you little one :)

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  12. RimlyJune 17, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    A beautiful, hear-felt rendition of the eclipse, my dear

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  13. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 8:24 PM

    liked ur dark expression written in enlighted way. :)

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  14. VaisakhiJune 18, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    lovely thought....i spcly loved the usage of words...1st 4 lines were like super awesome...loved it thoroughly....:)

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  15. RachitJune 18, 2011 at 10:49 PM

    beautiful and so intense :)

    regards,
    rachitlifestyle.blogspot.com
    n2mn.blogspot.com

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  16. Website Hosting IndiaJune 22, 2011 at 10:30 AM

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  17. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    @Irfan:
    Thank you :)

    @Snehu:
    Glad to see your comment :)..
    Thank you :)

    @Sanchi:
    But I want to feel the dark,the emptiness..how it feels!:)
    Thanks

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  18. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    @Sulekkha:
    Yep :)..As sadness transform to happiness the same dark transform to light:)..Thank you..

    @GeetS:
    Really WoW comment too;)
    Thank you..

    @Shona:
    How sweet! Thanks..

    @Eon Heath:
    Welcome back:)..
    Glad that you liked my thoughts ..thank you so much :)

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  19. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:48 AM

    @Hemant Kumar
    Thank you :)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete:
    Ya..thinking of that I wrote this!:)
    Thank you so much ..

    @Alpana:
    That's an honor me to listen this from you..Nice to hear from you
    thank you so much :D

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  20. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    @Dear one:
    That's true!
    Darkness helps us to find out who's there to protect us:)..It's scary,it's dark but still wants to feel it for a while.
    Thank you so much :)..love ya too

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  21. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    @Rimly:
    Thank you so much,Rimly :)..
    Thanks for stopping by..

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  22. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    @some unspoken words:
    Transforming :)...Glad you liked my enlighten thoughts..
    Thank you.

    @Vaisakhi:
    My best 4 lines;)..
    Thank you so much!

    @Rachit
    Thank you :)..

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  23. SimranJune 22, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    @Website hosting India:
    Welcome To my blog :)
    Thank you so much for such beautiful compliments :)..would love hear more from you..

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  24. Someone is SpecialJune 30, 2011 at 11:24 PM

    Heartfelt Post Simran..

    Someone is Special

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  25. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 3, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    beautiful.

    pleasant entry.

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  26. SimranDecember 3, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    Someone Is Special,
    Thank you so much! :)

    The Cello Strings,
    Thank you..Glad you liked it :)

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  27. Marbles in My PocketDecember 4, 2011 at 12:48 AM

    A beautifully vivid write. Nicely done!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/30/the-beast-2/

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  28. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    beautiful and the song tok it to another level!
    enjoy the rally!!!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/02/faces-and-shadows/

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  29. SimranDecember 4, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    Marbles in my pocket,
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thank you so much :)

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  30. SimranDecember 4, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    lynnaima,
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thank you so much!
    You over filled me with a joy!

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  31. The Orange TreeDecember 7, 2011 at 12:56 AM

    haunting,

    may sunshine fulfill you.

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