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Why I didn't see love in those staring eyes,

Those staring eyes were saying something to me from deep but I left it unread,
Why I didn't feel his emotions that was only for me filled with sacrifice just for my one smile,
Being familiar that he is in pain that was elongating like a huge chain,
Why did I never tried to ask him once ''Is everything is alright?''

Why I ignored the person,
Who was ready to ignore the entire world for me?
Oh! I am feeling so helpless,
Why I did so?
Being known to everything,
Why I behaved so unknown?

Why my heart didn't say anything to me or I left my heart unsaid?
I lost everything,
I feel my life without him is nothing,
How close he was to me,
But I made those distances,

I have regretted...
Why I treated him with a hopeless belief?
Why I didn't trust on his love, promises he made to me...
My eyes are waiting to see him for once,
My ear are waiting to listen those three beautiful words for once,
I have regret, 
Why I treated him with a hopeless belief..?




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  1. Sumit ChakrabortyApril 10, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    Simran :) There is only one word to explain this... awesome!

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  2. UnknownApril 10, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    Amazing poem.. :)
    I must say the poem was not at all sagacious .. bt i was entertaing me a lot.. :D


    Thanks a lot for sharing.. :)

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  3. rivercatApril 10, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    great topic. I wish I had an answer.
    why are we so attracted to those who dont love us back but luke warm to those who say they will do anything? hmm.. I dont think its really about looks, maybe just being immature. I know I might do things over differently regarding a few people from my past thst i never had a burning passion for but they told me they loved me.wow, this is a really good one simran :)

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  4. sHoNaApril 10, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    hmm. interesting.so agree.. fab!

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  5. IrfanuddinApril 10, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    it does happen.... and when we realise the fact then its too late some times.
    vey well written Simran.

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  6. VaisakhiApril 10, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    simran this was one of ur best writes trust me...beautifully exprssd...amazin flow..only one small probo i had which i ll let u know seprtly...but loved readin it..:)

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  7. Jidhu JoseApril 10, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    touching.

    one hour before, My class mate told abt her love to one of her frnd. But she didnt express it with him. I will share this with her

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  8. Jidhu JoseApril 10, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    touching.

    one hour before, My class mate told abt her love to one of her frnd. But she didnt express it with him. I will share this with her

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  9. Subhrashis AdhikariApril 10, 2011 at 4:49 PM

    awesome!

    Cheers!
    SUB

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  10. Tower BotiqueApril 10, 2011 at 6:07 PM

    whoa that's deep. nice. I've been there. You describe the feeling so well. very nice.

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  11. Melissa TandocApril 10, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    hmmmm little one... when i was younger, i was less assertive and would often let good opportunities pass by... but as i grow older, as i reflect on my life, i think of the doors i've closed and thanked God because there were other doors left for me to open... there were regrets, yes... but there are more things to look forward to... ;)...am still learning simran :)

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  12. VyankateshApril 10, 2011 at 7:14 PM

    The picture says it all!!

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  13. Vinesh BalanApril 10, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    The blog template, the picture, the font and even the font color... everything adds up to the beauty of the post.

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  14. smApril 11, 2011 at 2:48 AM

    touching poem
    thoughts

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  15. Steve IsaakApril 11, 2011 at 9:19 AM

    Solid, effective work. Good piece!

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  16. GeetaApril 11, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    amazing poem lovely wordingzz :)

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  17. Monu AwallaApril 11, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    I could feel the regret and remorse to the core of my heart..
    It moved me, truly.. :)

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  18. Eon HeathApril 11, 2011 at 12:03 PM

    Hey, Hi
    you have beautifully woven the verses...there were a few lines which were truly touching...overall its an excellent post...
    regrets...if only it aint that late, those words could still be said...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  19. Hema NimbekarApril 11, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    well penned and ful of deep thoughts...

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  20. BikramApril 11, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    this is life we generally repent once we have lost something ..

    but life has to go on and we should make sure we dont do the same mistake again. or if we feel so much about it then maybe Take a step back and TRY AGAIN.. who knows..

    Bikram's

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  21. Dr. Pratibha SinghApril 11, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    Do listen to your heart and believe me you won't regret.Loved this heartfelt expression.

    Beautiful!!
    KEEP WRITING
    AND KEEP SMILING!!

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  22. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    beautifully penned.loved it so much.

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  23. SimranApril 11, 2011 at 9:19 PM

    Sumit,
    Thanks Dear :)

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  24. SimranApril 11, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    Arjun,
    Glad that you enjoyed reading it!:)
    Keep Visiting!

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  25. AnonymousApril 12, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    ♥Love your blog♥

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  26. Mari Sterling WilburApril 12, 2011 at 7:42 AM

    Loved this! And I love your photo at the top of the page - it is delightful!

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  27. AlcinaApril 12, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    Awwiee baby :) ..Very beautiful :)

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  28. Beyond HorizonApril 12, 2011 at 3:44 PM

    Regret! The word am scared of too sometimes!

    Beautiful words from you Simran, just don't let the regret get on and control your mind and heart!
    :)

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  29. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺April 13, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    Feelings of regret expressed perfectly...Nice one!!

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  30. Ritz..April 15, 2011 at 12:38 AM

    Beautiful ... your poem
    Beautiful & intresting .... your blog....

    You express very well.....

    Ritz..
    www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com

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  31. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 12:48 AM

    impressive write up :)

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  32. AbhisekMay 9, 2011 at 2:59 AM

    The lines you wrote shows how deeply you regret...it happens Simmy..there's always something more to look forward to...ok now smile :D

    My new Blog When The Heart Speaks

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  33. SimranMay 23, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    Thanks to everyone for stopping by my space and leaving such beautiful comments!
    Keep giving me this love! :)

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