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An Unwanted Black Heart For You..!

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An Unwanted Black Heart For You..!
You made my life living hell..
That made me insecure and unwell,
You made me cry..
You made me hurt,
You made me despotic,
But still I Love you with all my heart,
But my heart is indignant to you,
Because of you;
It losted it's spark ,
Because of you;
It burned in flames without claims,
It was dreamy, But now it's dreary,
It was lovable ; but
Now it's hatred.
It was red , But now it's BLACK..!!!
Because of you...!
An Unwanted Black Heart for You..!
SIMRAN

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  1. AlcinaMarch 7, 2011 at 2:44 PM

    Hey simo
    Girl you Should be more forgiving in life if you have such a perception at this age it would not be good for you.
    Love is all about love there can be no hatred,it is all about giving and no taking away...your heart in love can never loose it's shine and sparkle. :)
    Hope to have a positive simo next time..will you be?

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  2. Dr. Pratibha SinghMarch 7, 2011 at 3:41 PM

    Don't get disheartened because you deserve to be happy and don't believe me but trust me, you have written a beautiful piece.So cheers!!

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  3. BikramMarch 7, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    can i use this please to send to someone who has the BLACKEST of the hearts a person can ever have...

    THANK YOU EXCTLY MY FEELINGS

    but god is great we will soon have ours to be red while THERES turn to CHARCOAL and then TO DUSTtttttttttt and AMEN to that .. and life will be worst then HELL for them ..

    Bikram's

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  4. adithyasaravanaMarch 7, 2011 at 8:50 PM

    how can you present a black heart for one whom you loved once?

    love or hatred? where does it sway?
    Isn't it true? that only one can stay?...

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  5. IrfanuddinMarch 7, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    once again very well done...
    just hope its a fiction only on your part...

    best wishes,
    irfan

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  6. ShariMarch 7, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    Very good poem. I hope its only a poem with fiction

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  7. AsmaMarch 7, 2011 at 10:31 PM

    Very nice poetry

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  8. HopeMarch 7, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    yes, forgiveness is a good thing. so...give that black heart away and forget about it so your red heart can replenish itself into a new and stronger one that has only love to give.

    loved your piece!
    it was moving and well thought out. you have a great gift and you express your emotions very well.

    keep up the good writing.

    love you you my friend!

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  9. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 2:15 AM

    really a great poem...
    it can't be a fiction i think,
    coz for writing something like this u need to feel it for sure...
    anyways forgiveness is something divine... as any love story moves just because lovers forgives each other but they don't forget...
    so just forgive but don't forget.

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  10. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    @Snehu
    Welcome back To my blog after a long time...happy to see you back :)
    I will be positive and forgiving next time :)
    Oh yes!, my heart is just like a Diamond, it will never loose it's spark ! :)

    Thank you so much for such a sweet and positive view :)
    Take care ..

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  11. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 1:10 PM

    @ Pratibha The Talent
    Thank You :)

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  12. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 1:11 PM

    @ Bikramjit
    Ya sure !
    Thank You :)

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  13. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    @adithyasaravana
    Welcome to my blog
    This hard but not impossible !!
    Thank You ..

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  14. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    @IRFAN
    Thank You :)

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  15. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 1:14 PM

    @Talha
    Thank You :)

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  16. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 1:14 PM

    @Asma
    Welcome to my blog
    Thank You :)

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  17. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    @Hope
    I appreciate your views :)
    Thank you so much for your wishes and love :)
    Lot's of love and wishes to you too dear ...Take care :)

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  18. VaisakhiMarch 8, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    wooo wat a transition...from sweet poems to a resentful work...nice piece..but y so down wid someone..:)....well i want tat red hert back...:)....keep writin......

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  19. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    @ Vaisakhi
    Hoping the same ...
    Thank You :)

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  20. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    @Rolling Stone
    I'll never forget :)

    Thank You :)

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  21. FatimaMarch 8, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    omg simran that's a wonderful poem...guess this is the first tym you've written something like this...

    Be positive and keep writing :)

    Take Care.

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  22. SimranMarch 8, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    @Fatima
    Yes, this is the first time I wrote something like this ..Ya sure next time with more mystery and positivity :)

    Thank You..
    Take care :)

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  23. ArtiMarch 9, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    Nicely written... the feelings came out well, its the first time I have read such a poem here, usually its cheerful!!
    Have a great day:)

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  24. SimranMarch 9, 2011 at 3:54 PM

    @Arti
    Yes, This is first time ,I wrote something like this ..I'll be back with that cheer soon :)
    Hoping so..

    Thank You :)

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  25. Geeta SinghMarch 10, 2011 at 10:26 AM

    nice post but after reading it, i felt so much ..keep smiling Dear:)

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  26. SimranMarch 10, 2011 at 12:58 PM

    @Geeta
    Welcome to my Blog :)
    I can understand that..
    You too keep Smiling :)

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  27. Geeta SinghMarch 11, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    beautiful song ..i love this song "when you say nothing at all" :)

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  28. SimranMarch 11, 2011 at 12:12 PM

    @Geeta
    :)

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  29. Ayush GuptaMarch 26, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    Nice one

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  30. SimranMarch 26, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    @Ayush Gupta
    Welcome to my Blog
    Thank You :)

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  31. Mohini PuranikMarch 26, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    Sad darling! What is this! I know your heart is golden. Sweet Poem! I just loved and faved it on BJ.

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  32. SimranMarch 26, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    @Mohinee
    Thank You so much dear :D

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  33. Susie ClevengerFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:27 AM

    Sometimes we just have to say what we feel whether it is pretty or not...nice work

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  34. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:56 AM

    This is ... a wonderful, but very sad poem. Strong in her words, strong in the imagery. Wow!

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  35. boogulooFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    Good to get it off your chest.

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  36. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2012 at 10:45 AM

    Strong feelings....
    Cheerup n cheers!!!
    Just pay attention to ur feelings more before u pen them down...

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  37. ~LFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:38 AM

    ... sigh

    I felt that extremely deep! My last two post were pretty dark... yet this last one was about a love turned dark too.

    you expressed you feelings so well and with such talent! Your words touched me.

    ~L

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  38. JANUFebruary 23, 2012 at 1:05 PM

    You can feel and say what you feel like...loved this.

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  39. br!nDleFebruary 23, 2012 at 5:44 PM

    i could feel what you wrote...loved it...:)

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  40. The PoetFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    My sweet Simran,
    I feel the pain of your black heart. Forgive the one who wronged you so your heart will reopen to love again.
    Wonderful writing!
    Thanks for sharing.

    No Anguish Or Pain

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  41. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:24 PM

    heatfelt words...

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  42. KarenFebruary 24, 2012 at 12:22 AM

    A powerful expression! The spark will return, when your heart mends.

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  43. elaine danforthFebruary 29, 2012 at 8:56 AM

    I think you have done a good job of expressing both sides of the issue, allowing the dark side to dominate in this particular moment, an important part of the reality of some relationships that are supposed to be about love.

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  44. dakshiFebruary 29, 2012 at 7:37 PM

    wonderfully felt...

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