I am in pain,
Have nothing to gain,
I am crying rolling down tears,
I am alone ; no one is here,
I want to make our relationship deeper,
But you are not ready to maintain it's demeanour,
I always tried to decipher your heart,
But you always deplored my emotions,
Eyes are staring at you with fear,
I want my grief to be shared,
But there is no one not even you to care,
There is no one to hear,
But I want to make all things clear,
There is nothing more in my life to cheer..
Because I am far away from my dear,
And that's the voice of my pain within that no one can hear.
How you write so well yaar..so mature..at this age u are writing about inner pain...with so much intensity....u always amaze me...
ReplyDeleteI m still questioning how come u hv experienced such different situations of life at this early stage of life...???how and what??
at your age life is so lively and joyful...somehow I think you are a poetess by heart...by born....
Aww..simo baby..that was a heartbreak poem.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done sweet<3 :)
sad one but if this is NOT fiction then time to move on :) find someone who cares and loves one ..
ReplyDeleteBikram's
:( y r u so sad ..keep smiling dear
ReplyDeletenicely penned....words woven beautifully...but y so sad...as far as i know u u r not the sad typo writr....neways...it was a good read...:)
ReplyDeletea very nice written poem tells ur sad mood.hmm so why are you so sad dear.
ReplyDeletewe are hear when u are sad,
just tell us what do u need,
we shall try to cheer you up,
as well as will try to make u smile,
so do smile and cheer up for ur frnds haa... keep smiling.. there are so many who cares about you and who loves you.. :)
but then, why hold on to something that does not exist?
ReplyDeleteNicely written.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Really touching! I am speechless.
ReplyDeletetruly a painful thought..one of my friend is going through this phase.. so I felt ur words as my ambience.. do visit my blog too.. c ya.. :)
ReplyDeletewell written piece! It is very passionate and full of emotion. I felt every word!
ReplyDeleteKeep writing, dear friend. It is very good for you and more so when you share!
thank you!
Very emotional. Loved the rhythm! :)
ReplyDelete@Hema di
ReplyDeleteWhatever comes into my mind and whatever I feel,I write ..
Well,I would like to go with your last line :)
Thanks a ton :)
Keep Visiting
@Snehu
ReplyDeleteThank You so much sweety :)
@Bikramjit
ReplyDeleteThat's the way of living life :)
Thanks :)
@Geeta
ReplyDeleteI don't want smile alone..You too smile :)
@Vaisakhi
ReplyDeleteThank You :)
@Some unspoken words
ReplyDeleteHow sweet you are :)
Thank You so much for such beautiful lines and making me realize that I am not alone..
Thank You so much dear :)
@Anshul
ReplyDeleteIt's affection not ready to leave..
Thanks dear :)
@Mohinee
ReplyDelete:)
@Monu Awalla
ReplyDeleteOh..It's a worse pain..
Thanks :)
@Hope
ReplyDeleteHappy that you felt it's deepness..
It is good for me ..
Thank You :)
@PsycheBubbles
ReplyDeleteGlad that you liked it :)
Wonderfully written Simran...
ReplyDeleteThe lines "But there is no one not even you to care" were just amazing:)
@Arti
ReplyDeleteThank You :)
Sad and touching poem but so wisely done!
ReplyDeleteVery good ... your language is very good ... presentation is excellent as the blog theme is very beautiful ...
ReplyDelete@Short poems
ReplyDeleteWelcome To my Blog:)
Thank You :D
Do visit again ..
@Indranil Bhattacharjee ........."सैल" Welcome :)
Glad that you liked it :)
Do visit again..
Amazing poem... BTw u knw wat.. as soon as that music at the backGround started i was like ! DANG ~~ Thats what i call a true poetry blog.. :)
ReplyDeleteAMAZING >> :)
REGARDS
ARJUN SINGH
Nicely written.
ReplyDelete@Arjun Singh
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog :)
Thanks :)
Do vist again
@Amrendra ''amar''
Thanks :)
Do visit again
Very touching poem. sorry can't comment on latest post as I dont read Hindi :)
ReplyDeleteVery deep and awesome poem
ReplyDelete@Talha
ReplyDeleteThanks Dear..
It's ok :)
@Asma
ReplyDeleteThank You so much dear :D
Simran, you have conveyed so much in these lines.. beautiful pain, I have to say... and to lose something is the worst pain in this world, hope he comes back soon..
ReplyDeleteif this is just a thought then I am glad that you have a great talent..
I would have been much more happier if you had shared this with BlogJunta 'to have loved and lost' contest and I am damn sure this would have won of the awards there..
SmileS..
Someone is Special
@Someone is Special
ReplyDeleteThanks for such a lovely compliment dear :)
Yeah , will surely post on blog junta :D
Very nice. I can really feel the helplessness.
ReplyDelete@FLIM FLAM SAM
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog :)
Glad that you felt it!
Thank You so much for following ..
Keep Visiting..
Ohw dear...Even I felt those feelings..:(
ReplyDeleteEverything will be alri8 soon :]
heartfelt poem with full of emotions...
keep writing Simran
@Valli
ReplyDeleteGlad that you felt my words so deep..
Thanks for your wishes :)
Keep Visiting dear :)
Simran, you are sooooooooo talented. HOw deep you think. Well done
ReplyDeleteAlways Happy
ReplyDeleteHey,Thanks dear! :)
Glad that you liked it..
Take care! :)