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कोयल

Written By My Grandmother  SWARN KAUR:).
Seeing my poems on blog she insisted me to post her poem also :D


कोयल तेरी बोली प्यारी ,
फिर तू   कित कारण है काली 
पियो पियो करते युग है बीते ,
फिर भी तुने  आस न हारी तेरे अंतर की पीड़ा बिरहा की छाली,
हुए निराश ह्रदय मे तू एक अटल विश्वाश जगाती 
तेरे मर्म की भेद मै जानी तू है बिरहा जालन काली 

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  1. बहुत हि सुंदर बहुत अद्भूत कोयल की बोली की तऱ्ह मिठी :)

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  2. कला तो कान्हा भी था, पर फिर भी सभी गोपियों के हृदय में बसता था... :D

    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. @Anshul
    Same with Koyal Bird too :D

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  4. how sweet....n mujhe hindi padhne ko hua n samajh bhi aayi...:)...

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  5. Tell your Granny, she can start a blog too!

    Nice poem Simran. Please pass this onto your granny.

    my fav line - niraash hriday mein atal vishwaas jagaathi.

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  6. Dadi ko bolna behot hee sunder poem hai. :)

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  7. wow!!!
    now i know from where you got talent....talented granddaughter of grandmother...

    tell her she should write more and start a blog too...and I am sure you would help her on this...

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  8. thats an omg poem written by ur grandmom.. as alz happy said ask to ur granny that she sud also start a blog

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  9. सुंदर और सारपूर्ण रचना .दादी जी को सलाम

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  10. lovely poem and please extend my regards to your grand ma..

    Heres wishing we get to read plenty more of these lovely poems

    Bikram's

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  11. .....:)

    plz convey my sincere Regards to your Grand mother.....

    irfan.

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  12. great work, and very deep indeed...
    liked it..:):):)...

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  13. Actually am not that good at Hindi Simran...
    Can read and understand to some extent...:]
    understood some lines here and there...

    As far as I understood...Poem is very beautiful...with cute rhymings...

    Convey my regards to your Grandma!

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  14. A big Thanks to all of you :D
    And blessings of my Granny to you all. She is very happy that you all liked her poem.As many of you asked her to do blogging. So, I have decided to post her poems here only with her name time to time along with my posts :).

    Keep Smiling :)

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  15. Hey simo
    after the last comment i gave up on your blog you said something in return :P
    Darling i have been reading all your post..just that wasn't able to comment on all..look at the pace how fast your imagination is flowing so i am a bit slow..sorry simo :)

    And your grandmother has written such a beautiful piece :)

    tc

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  16. amazing vocab in hindi.. u must try to publish ur poems somewhere. truly admirable..! :)

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  17. oops! dis poem belongs to ur grand ma! gud to knw u posted ur grand ma's poems too.. ur's, too, r really beautifully pearl-studded poems.. hats off to u..:)

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  18. Your grandma is really good Simran...No doubt you are so good too!!!
    Give my regards :)

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  19. @Snehu
    Oh,I was not knowing about..
    It's ok dear don't feel sorry.
    Thank You so much
    Take care too :)

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  20. @Monu Awalla
    Welcome On my blog
    Thanks :)

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  21. @Poonam
    Thank You so much Dear :)

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