Thinking of you ; I smiled,
Thinking of you; I cried,
Thinking of you made me dreamy,
Thinking of you made me dreary,
I asked myself why this is so?
My heart insisted and replied!
It's because as much as I cared for you as the same I feared of loosing you!!
I told my heart that their is only one about whom I think day and night ;
And that's my love,
Not even the segment of my life ,
It's when I found you near to me; I cherish,
And when I found you far ;
I found my world perish!
Your presence made my life mirthful,
Your presence made my life beautiful,
Sometimes my heart depressed without you..
And my heart said ;
I am incomplete without you!
Your absence made my life worthless,
Whenever I found myself alone,
Your words comes into my mind like a beautiful tone,
Whenever I close my eyes your dreams and thoughts made me realize,
That their is nothing to cheer without you in my life!
SIMRAN KAUR.
Cute lines! Keep writing! :)
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ReplyDelete"I admire this awesome poem"...
Rock on.........
Someone is Special
Awesome!
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
:)
hmmm indeed we are incomplete without the love of our life...
ReplyDeletelovely poem .. Take care
Bikram's
Ah love, its all over this blog.
ReplyDeleteNice lines.
:)
Its so Beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteWhere there is Love...fear does prevails itself
beautiful poem
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@ Someone Special
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for admiring my work!
You too keep rocking dear :)
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@The Blue Periwinkle
Welcome to my blog!
Thanks :)
@Bikramjit
Thanks a lot dear :)
You too take care!
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Thanks dear..You made my day!
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@Beyond Horizon
Ya that's true!
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@sm
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Very nice poem. Loved this line
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@Talha
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Here on the blog for the 1st time and simply loved the post Awesome is the words that suits your post...
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WoW!!!!!!! Really beautifull Sim :) Really amazing. Also very beautifull changes you have made in this page. Which reminds me Life is Colourfull & Beautifull too :)
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ReplyDeleteWelcome back to my blog :)
Glad that my changes reminded you that Life is colourful and beautiful!
Thanks a lot for appreciating my work.
Its very nice....one can feel it if they love someone :)
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Hoping your more visits and valuable comments on my space in future too :)
very nice....keep writing...
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I just came across your blog and must say its lovely...something or the other has to have a pinch of love in it !
ReplyDeleteThis was a beautiful poem.
Keep writing and blogging :)
Do visit my blog too...
Take Care,
Fatima
@duskndawn
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my my u seems to be in a deep love with someone....
ReplyDeletegreat poem i must say..
and all these raining little stars on your blog are making it look really cute and girlie...
keep blogging.. and I am following u back.
hey.... where is my comment????
ReplyDeletewhat happened simran.....
@Rolling stone
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog :)
Thinking of love i wrote all these :)
Glad that you liked it !
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@Irfan
ReplyDeleteDidn't got your comment :(
there are always certain people or certain relation in our life without whom there is nothing to cheer about in our life....
ReplyDeletenice thoughts, simran.
I loved your blog. It's so beautiful! The poem is also so beautiful i just loved it. Really sweet one. thanks for sharing ur link wid me. My cute and best wishes for you always.....Simran! :)
ReplyDelete@Irfan
ReplyDeleteTruely said!
Thank You :)
@ Mohinee
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hi simran
ReplyDeletethanks for visiting my blog & being my follower.....u have a cute blog with cute poetry.....
@ Sumanmeet
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welcome to my blog..
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romance at its best, nicely done!!! and thanks for your visit and sweet comment! i appreciate it.
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was browsin through ma frnd's blog n found u there....glad i came to ur blog....coz this poems is super cool....love flowin in every line...n u relatd it to a walk to remembr...so it was like cherry on the cake...simply loved it...
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Vaisakhi...
@Vaisakhi
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I am honoured!
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Following you back now :-D
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Beautifully penned down... Very touching, the emotions came out really well...
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@Arti
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