Sunday, July 05, 2015

Lost peace!

The world full of chaos 
and lives running on wheel
amidst blind race and evil
With lost peace of mind
Flute, nowhere to be heard.

Written for A Prompt Each Day - Sunday #5
and Ultimate Blog Challenge - Day #5

17 comments:

  1. Quite true. We're in such a hurry, and at most times, in the loudness of our life and life around us, that the simple things seem lost.

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  2. Yes, Simran,in the hum drum of daily life, we forget to enjoy the joys of daily life. Well written.

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  3. The fast pace of life these days leaves us with no peace of mind. Nicely put in the poem :)

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  4. I've learned over years of practice to stay in my own peaceful zone no matter what goes on around me. To me that is what gains us a place of solid ground.

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    1. That's a wonderful thing, Sue! :)

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  5. Haste and chaos captured well here, Simran. Great job in this limited words! :)

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    1. This made me happy. Glad you liked it. Thank you :)

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  6. Wait! Don't I hear a flute piping in the distance? Can't you hear it too? ;)

    Bamboo Flute

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    1. I am glad you can hear it around :)

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  7. I love this one! The truth :)

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