The beauty of hairs Attracts and capture the attention of every stare, But it is hard to nourish and to give proper care Busy schedule and outings makes them dull and shiny rare, My beauty is evading away... I'm aware! Nothing is with me that can sooth me or do fair justice with my thin hairs Then I recapitulated the famous saying: ''Love is a two way street: Love your hair and it loves you back'' Searching all around I found the trustworthy Dove, I pampered my hairs and said, don’t worry now it's Dove for you to love, And the day I started this beautiful journey of Dove's Love, I found a brand new day waiting for me to see my true colors of pulchritude Embraced me within its charm and defined me with a unique personality! Restoring the softness It nourished my dry hairs, Now my hairs fall very rare, They can feel the fresh air, Dove lengthen my hairs With eternal shine and strength Though I don't have much time for my hairs But having Dove alo
I love the ending more "that too with loyalty"
ReplyDeleteSo perfect with words Simran, one day I wish to rhyme as fluently as you do.
I am happy, you got it exactly what I wanted to convey through the single word Loyalty...
DeleteThanks for the appreciation, I'm flying :D
You already rhyme so beautiful dear ..even better than me :)
Lovely lines! Keep smiling! :)
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DeleteThank you!
My best wishes to you..
Hii Simran... beautiful blog u hv!!and I am amazed 2 find sm1 who share similar thot process like I do...
ReplyDeleteN nature is the best friend one cn have.... a loyal one indeed!
Welcome to My Friendship, Satya
DeleteHi,
I was waiting from so long for you visit :-)
Glad we have something in common...Yes, nature will be always the loyal one than this fake world and its ppl!
I am reallyyyy happy to receive your comment...
Thank u so much
Stay Smiling & Happy Blogging
Yes it comes with loyalty.. :)
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Its deep here. I hope you got that :)
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