Friday, June 01, 2012

Feelings remain indelible when...

I want to know your dream , your desire , your destiny 
Tell me where I should take you to?
My dream is to be in your embrace till my last breath,
My desire is to be the reason of your heartbeats,
My destiny is, the path to follow that unite ME & YOU with heart and soul...
Take me wherever you like...
That destine ME & YOU!
Listening her promising words he vow her with a kiss on her forehead to assure her,
''I promise our love will remain evergreen and everlasting, I have faith in you.''


''Feelings remain indelible when admired in the same way from the other side.''

36 comments:

  1. Beautiful Simran! Hope love makes it possible for you... best wishes :)

    Btw. The music was soothing beside!

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    1. I wish the same :)
      Thank you so much for your precious wishes...

      Music adds meaning in those unsaid words hidden deep within. Music has a magic to make you lost in love with!
      Glad you liked!
      :)

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  2. Lovely tender thoughts, Simran:)

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    1. Happy to have you back! :)

      Your appreciating words make me smile!
      Thank you so much.

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  3. Sims is in love? ;) Kaun hai woh lucky ladka :D

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    1. Pyaar deewana hota hai mastaana hota hai ..Dearo :D

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  4. beautiful verses Simran dear!!!
    takes me to land of dreams :D:D:D

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    1. Fantasy of love! :)
      Take a round once ;)

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  5. Very Beautiful Little One.. Having faith is the best gift.. SmileS..

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    1. Having faith strengthen the roots of relation...
      Its the best gift indeed!
      Thanks, Special One
      SmileS

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  6. Love is a beautiful feeling !
    Nice thoughts expressed in the poem.

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    1. Thank you so much Shobha Ji...
      Glad you liked it!

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  7. How beautifully written little one. Have you ever felt that way?

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    1. Glad you liked it Dear One! :)
      Hmm... :)

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  8. Dear Simran,
    There really is no greater gift than the gift and promise of faithful love.
    This is so gentle and tender. Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing, my precious one.

    If you are free, come join the fun happening now over at Blog Hop Saturday! Hope you can make it!

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    1. Welcome Andy Dear,
      Happy you liked and found it beautiful.Oops I checked it late and so the time's up! Sad!
      Will take part in upcoming challenges :)

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    1. Hey Dearie! :)
      Changed your name??
      I checked out your blog and found it's you, Sid!
      Happy to have you here back!

      Glad you felt my write up cute :)
      Thanks!

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  10. its been a long time i visited ur blog. lovely poem and optimistic flow. hows u doing dear :)

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    1. Hey Annu dear! :)

      Yep! Its been long long ago you visited me!
      It feels great to have sweet readers back! I miss you but what to say, I know everyone is too busy! Hmm...
      Happy to have you dear! Glad you liked it!
      I am all doing great ..hope you too :)

      Keep Visiting me . Your comments means a lot to me!
      Love and Wishes

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  11. Very beautiful lines Simi....Cute write :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Valli :)
      Love to see you here ...

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  12. Very beautiful lines Simi...Cute write :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Valli :)
      Love to see you here ...

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  13. very b'fully expressed Simran... loved it

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, TTT

      Glad you felt it beautiful and loved it! :)
      Thank you so much dear. Happy to have you!

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  14. indeed they r indelible :)
    beautiful n delicate verses, very much as feelings r

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    1. Welcome Jyoti :)

      Love to listen from you!
      Thanks a lot! :)

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  15. Inspired and touching. Good detail.

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, K. Shawn Edgar

      Glad it inspired you :)
      thanks

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  16. Loved those bits…. . hAHAHAH!!! coolness! :)loved the style.. enjoyed reading it ...it was quite refreshing to read ....
    lovely woven words and narrative:)...Keep up the good work:)

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    1. Happy to read your views...
      They makes me sure, I am going great in my writings :)
      Glad you loved the style!
      Thanks a lot, Shona!
      Having you here is so inspiring for me.

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  17. I've certainly enjoyed reading this blissful narrative of love. May you find your destiny, dear Simran.

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    1. Welcome To My Friendship,Dear Kay

      Happy you enjoyed the read and felt the bliss...
      Thanks a lot for your wishes dear Kay.
      Wish to see you here again.

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  18. Take me wherever you like...
    That destine ME & YOU

    <3
    <3
    You've captured those feelings dear Simran. This is awesome.

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    1. Glad you liked it :)
      Thanks dearie <3

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Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran