Wednesday, February 01, 2012

Vague





Concealed pain within 
rushing into vein and soul  
blurring way I opt

7 comments:

  1. wow! amazing creative twist on the haiku subject. I like!

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  2. Simran,

    Welcome to the challenge! 'Blurring way I opt' - Pain painted both in words and picture..

    Someone is Special

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  3. pain that is concealed is bad get it out ..

    Bikram's

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  4. Hello Simran dear.
    That's the worst kind of pain.
    Nicely expressed.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Kingship Of Love

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