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Concealed pain within 
rushing into vein and soul  
blurring way I opt
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  1. Andy SewinaFebruary 1, 2012 at 9:06 PM

    Sounds nasty, well recorded!

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  2. JANUFebruary 1, 2012 at 10:36 PM

    Awww, painful.

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  3. becca givensFebruary 1, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    Oh my -- that is some pain!

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  4. HopeFebruary 1, 2012 at 11:35 PM

    wow! amazing creative twist on the haiku subject. I like!

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  5. Someone is SpecialFebruary 2, 2012 at 3:30 AM

    Simran,

    Welcome to the challenge! 'Blurring way I opt' - Pain painted both in words and picture..

    Someone is Special

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  6. BikramFebruary 2, 2012 at 5:23 PM

    pain that is concealed is bad get it out ..

    Bikram's

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  7. The PoetFebruary 3, 2012 at 7:57 AM

    Hello Simran dear.
    That's the worst kind of pain.
    Nicely expressed.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Kingship Of Love

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