Friday, February 03, 2012

Deficit

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 3 – February 3rd  – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Anand of: Apple Blossom's Photography



Shivering hands with
impecunious stick scream
seeks gentility

14 comments:

  1. WELL DONE creating a powerful word imagery!!!

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  2. one sentence haiku, well expressed.

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  3. yes little one the hands seeks.. let God be with her.. PS: The badge in the sidebar is too big update it with the new code :-)

    Someone is Special

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  4. I like that shivering hands image ~

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  5. Amazing the way you word painted the middle line!

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  6. You're quite good at creating haiku! Powerful!

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/02/lyric-fire-lace-fronts-and-hymn-books-a-poem-about-self-anointed-truth-talkers.html

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  7. fantasy in practicality,
    And right now my eyes are sparking bright with happiness.. :)
    Thank you,Sanchi!

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  8. clear expressions..
    its not easy to convey such message in few words.. !!

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