the whole combination of words spark:)
WELL DONE creating a powerful word imagery!!!
Strong imagery in your words!
one sentence haiku, well expressed.
yes little one the hands seeks.. let God be with her.. PS: The badge in the sidebar is too big update it with the new code :-)Someone is Special
I like that shivering hands image ~
Amazing the way you word painted the middle line!
You're quite good at creating haiku! Powerful!http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/02/lyric-fire-lace-fronts-and-hymn-books-a-poem-about-self-anointed-truth-talkers.html
fantasy in practicality,And right now my eyes are sparking bright with happiness.. :)Thank you,Sanchi!
clear expressions..its not easy to convey such message in few words.. !!
Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!~Simran